The Most Scared I'Ve Ever Been

Cruising along on my horse
Relaxing-enjoying the ride
When all of the sudden, out of nowhere
My mare jumped off to the side

She went left and I went right
And when I hit, I sure hit rough
I just laid there for a second
It’s a good thing that I’m tough

Unknown to me an rattler
Had spooked my untried mare
And when she dumped me on the ground
I lay there unaware

Then as I made a sudden move
He coiled up in his defense
His rattles clicked just a bit
I saw him then and tensed
 
My heart was pounding in my chest
It was in the grip of fear
Adrenalin coursing through my veins
I was afraid the end was near

As he readied himself up for a strike
And I knew I couldn’t stay there
I launched myself just as he struck
And he caught nothing but air

I grabbed a rock to hit him
To persuade him on his way
He slithered off while I just panted
My mare had run away

I was shaking so bad as I walked home
I thought my knee’s would give out
That was the most scared I’ve ever been
I know that without a doubt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 6/22/2010 2:24:00 AM
That was a very cool poem. What kind of horses do you have?
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Date: 6/19/2010 8:57:00 PM
Very amazing story to read.
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Date: 6/19/2010 4:01:00 PM
enjoyed the story, hope it was not true!!
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Date: 6/19/2010 2:58:00 PM
Great story told in Rhyme...Hope that you have no more of those encounters..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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