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The Most Imperfect Storm

words fly in the air like clouds crashing together with thunder feelings reach higher altitudes rain fills my eyes with disbelief lungs heavy weighed down with words unsaid dripping wet with emotions swimming in yesterdays sorrows waiting for the lightning that will awaken my freedom the most imperfect storm

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Joseph May

Date: 7/19/2017 4:21:00 PM

Very nicely penned Kathleen, I really like the freedom line...Keep writing..Welcome to Poetry Soup

Kate Margaret
Date: 7/19/2017 7:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Joseph :)!!

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 7/16/2017 3:58:00 AM

Impressive write Kathleen. Storms of life are the worst.

Kate Margaret
Date: 7/16/2017 10:49:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words!

Darren White

Date: 7/16/2017 3:53:00 AM

Great metaphor that you started in the first line, and maintained all the way through. This is Free Verse, if you like to know the correct poetry form. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)

Kate Margaret
Date: 7/16/2017 10:48:00 AM

I really appreciate your feedback, thank you :)

Jacqueline Elston

Date: 7/15/2017 4:27:00 PM

this is how l feel sometimes..loved your words. thank you for sharing.

Kate Margaret
Date: 7/15/2017 5:01:00 PM

thanks so much Jackie!