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The Most Compelling Flower

I remember the time-freezing moment When Lieutenant Dan made his peace And opened the dimension of gratitude The audience experiencing the quickening I myself have come full circle And found a tranquil harmony No longer griping about the government The church, or scapegoats on TV How immature for me to think That fairness grows like a flower Our souls MUST experience injustice The reference point of abuse of power Without a garden of universal cruelty How could we ever understand love? So with a heart of gratitude I give thanks For the blossoming of this compelling bud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/30/2011 8:05:00 PM
This poem is Outstanding David, and I feel most would be able to relate in one way or another. Your ending....superb!
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Date: 6/25/2011 7:31:00 AM
we are both on the same petal in this write of yours David. Your title goes well with the meat of your words. I also believe for myself that in unison with experiencing injustice done unto me and others to grow as I believe your poem is stating; I also have grown as in your last stanza by actually experiencing the commiting of injustice myself. All part of growth for some, I reckon. I enjoyed your Poem David. Have a great one
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