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The Most Biggest Moment of My Adult Life Ever

The morning arrived, the morning of days, 
The biggest, greatest day of my life.
I laid out my work suit, from the tie to the shoes,
And then I kissed my beautiful wife.

Trousers done tight, my flat ironed shirt, 
Woolly, warm socks covering my feet.
And I slid both of them into both of my shoes,
My laces would make me complete.

Till then I used a binding, loopy, granny knot,
Often coming loose, slipping to undo.
It occurred a reef knot would hold tight all day long, 
Hold my foot tight inside of my shoe.

So I changed in that moment, for the rest of my life, 
I now stride high with a skip and a song.
My shoelaces are reef knotted, not a flimsy insecure, 
Staying tight for all the day long.



For contest Something Seemingly Insignificant and Unexpected Changed My Life - Poetry Contest, June 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 8:56 AM
A clever write.
Allison Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 6:00 PM
Such a simple change but it can have a big impact - love the simplicity of the idea - great one Lewis good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Raynes Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 8:27 PM
thanks Jan, fingers crossed.
Cheema Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 1:31 PM
The simplicity in your thought and approach is admirable, Lewis! Good Luck!
Raynes Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Thank yo Balveen.
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