The Mortal and the Wise One

Mortal:                                            


Why does one care about my well being.
I am but one mortal in deaths keep.
I am but one mortal in poverties garden.
So why does one care about my opinion.
I am but the strings on a puppet,
Not even worth mentioning.
So why does one care about the tears I shed,
Upon this baron world.
I am but a speck of sand,
In its desert.
So why, o, why wise one.

Wise one:	


“Because you are a mere mortal,
That I care.    
And it only takes one pure speech, and devotion, to 
Change this hellish land into a thing of beauty.”


* “it takes a Civilization, to destroy the world
     And it takes a Civilization to nurture it.
     But it takes one mortal to inspire that nurturing care and spread it like wild fire upon the  
land"




* i made that up
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 4/9/2010 1:57:00 PM
The last part . Well . the intire poem . Sayss. Better luck in the next planet . The reason is all I see is what you just said . we destroy our own world. Do not worry . Your poem is the best made up poem with truth ...P.D.
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Date: 4/9/2010 1:56:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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