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WALKING UNDER THE SUN

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 04 FEBRUARY 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

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The Morning Sun

Walking under the morning sun

Its rays tenderly me embrace

Saying, life a gentle stroll should be 

Not a strenuous marathon race! *







© Demetrios Trifiatis
     04 February 2017


* Walking up the hill this morning 
this is the... message I got!

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Anne-Lise Andresen

February 4, 2017 at 2:34 PM

- Sounds like a wonderful morning in the sunshine and harmony ... mine was gray and rainy - A lovely poem, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 4, 2017 at 2:50 PM

YES, it was and I enjoyed it! You see my friend, Anne-Lise because it was too cold for Greece this year I had avoided long walks but today I did seven Km, usually I do more than 12. Thank you for you dear visit!

Wendy Rycroft

February 4, 2017 at 10:09 AM

The beauty you see everyday pure heaven I wish I lived where you live, I wish I had your green fingers x The weather looks sunny and hot x I watch you from my damp cold home in envy xxxxx

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 4, 2017 at 2:11 PM

Yes, Greece is a beautiful country and presents me with the opportunity to keep a roof garden but this year was extremely difficult for it was the coldest of the last thirty years however I have managed to keep my flowers alive. Greece though suffers because of economic and political problems . Greeks became poorer by 50% in the last six years and 27% are unemployed. So think again! Thank you so much for visiting dear, Wendy!

Carol B.

February 4, 2017 at 8:47 AM

I find long walks can be very therapeutic. It helps clear my mind. I really like your poem. It sounds like you had a wonderful morning.

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 4, 2017 at 2:15 PM

Yes, I had a great morning! I love long walks! The longest walk I have ever had was that of 50Km, this was done on my 50th Birthday! Thank you so much dear, Carol!

Suzanne Delaney

February 4, 2017 at 8:10 AM

The simple joys So wise as always, Dear Friend..........

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 4, 2017 at 2:17 PM

How wonderful to see you again dear, Suzanne! Thank you so much for your lovely visit!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 4, 2017 at 8:09 AM

Great write, heeded lesson. I often stop to smell the roses. Cheers! Mo

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 4, 2017 at 2:19 PM

Hello, Mo! I am delighted for your visit! I always take time to smell the roses and all flowers! Thank you so much for visiting!

Probir Gupta

February 4, 2017 at 6:25 AM

I prefer the flower/the quatrain invites/I shift to it/ The flower incites/Where to go/Only Demetrios knows/ The creator/ Of beauty and sublime letters ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 4, 2017 at 2:20 PM

You spoil me my dearest friend, Probir! What a tribute it is especially coming from you! Thank you my friend!