The Morning Scene
The Morning Scene(double Tanka)
Sky looks bright and clear,
A deer stares at me gaily,
~gale wind blows the trees;
as I entered the backyard,
The ground covered with green weeds.
Weeds are entangled
with cobwebs spread like fish nets;
The canary sings,
~branches move to the rhythm,
and the breeze whistles along.
Olusegun Arowolo;9/15/11:contest:"The view-a tanka"
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