Notes About The Poem

- the Morning Rise -

Songbirds
                                             new light appears
                                          treetop orchestra plays
                                      the heaven's jubilant fanfare
                                                      artist





17.05.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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Song of my heart Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: JCB Brul
1st place in the contest
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Radice Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 1:28 AM
I love your description of nature in tune with the morning. Cheers - Gary
Kauffman Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 11:43 AM
Congratulations on your first place win Anne-Lise. Morning's "jubilant" song literally jumps off of the page through your vibrant images! Blessings and hugs to you every day and each morning!
George Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 9:37 AM
Beautiful image of dawn ! Congratulations on your top win dear Anne. Hugs !
Canerdy Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 7:32 AM
Superb metaphors in this lovely poem, Anne-Lise. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
Congratulations on your great win in the Contest ...Anne. Wonderful poem dear.
Poet Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 4:01 AM
Back with congratulations on your contest top winner with this beautiful poem.
Narain Avatar
May 23, 2023 at 5:51 PM
Nice poem with beautiful picture.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 9:01 AM
It is the little things…the images caught by our naked eyes!
Dutta Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 4:56 AM
Jubilant fanfare ! Very nice. All the best
George Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 7:57 PM
Lovely ! Greatly enjoyed .... ! All the Best dear friend.
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 4:24 PM
Gorgeous and inspiring!
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 12:06 PM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Andrea :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 2:23 PM
Nature's magnificence is wonderfully conveyed through the loveliness of this work. :)
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 12:07 PM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Evelyn :) - hugs
Parker Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 2:14 PM
there are those that write about nature, then there are those who feel nature in every breath, then write about what they see and feel...you feel nature dear poet...
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 12:09 PM
- one has to feel ... to put the picture into words, Frederic :) - Nature's beautiful orchestra ... thank you for your lovely comment :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 1:40 PM
Ahh!! I a very creative work for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 12:06 PM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Sara :) - hugs
Rose  Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 10:25 AM
I give credit to the artist who painted us such a beautiful view, and I give credit for the poet in you who so lovingly shares it with us. :)
Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 1:11 PM
- Glad you liked it, thank you very much Vie Rose :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 9:13 AM
Anne-Lise, you have painted a picture of a heavenly celebration complete with an orchestra playing in the treetops.
Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 1:10 PM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Las :) - hugs
Hind Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 8:22 AM
Beautiful and lovely...
Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 1:10 PM
- Thanks a lot, Paige :) - hugs
Daniel Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 5:16 AM
This is beautiful, Anne-Lise:) great word pairings:)
Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 1:09 PM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Jo :) - hugs
Mcintosh Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 3:02 AM
Love it. Beautiful. God bless you sweet friend, love, Gina
Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 1:08 PM
- Thanks a lot, Gina :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 11:14 PM
wow what lovely lines - i adore treetop orchesta plays - so accurate a description Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 3:00 AM
- A pleasure to watch - orchestra in the morning sun, Jan - Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 11:03 PM
Your description is stupendous. Well done Anne Lise.
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 2:56 AM
- Glad you liked it, thank you very much my friend Victor :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 3:30 PM
treetop orchestra plays- the heaven's jubilant fanfare... so beautifully described, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 2:55 AM
- Nature's own orchestra, Vijay ... thank you for your lovely comment :) - hugs
Romios Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 2:41 PM
What a super Cinquain, my friend, I can see and hear morning’s song… Beautiful.. Pangie xx
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 2:54 AM
- A beautiful morning to share with you, many thanks for reading and listening, Pangie :) - hugs
Kaufman Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 2:07 PM
lovely, lovely Anne-Lise. I wish you the best in the contest..
Andresen Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 2:14 PM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Nancy :) - hugs
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