The Morning Is Calm

the morning is calm
walking, I note cloudy sky
and the cool breeze
I hurry to cut the grass
before the spring rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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August 21, 2013 at 12:23 AM
hmmm, you have put up lots of Asian forms since June, so I think I will take a look at them. Again, I am no expert. I like this one. I got rejected in a tanka magazine, so I guess I don't know much about tanka. This actually seems to me like what that magazine would have liked because they were taking things related to the norm and I was trying to show them stuff that was more like out of the norm.
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