Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

The Morning After

On the morning after 
a bath of light is vortexed in the embers of last night 
A spool unravels beneath 
his fervent gaze, she has been happily loved 

 "LOVE WEAVES A MYSTERIOUS MAGIC SPELL"

that no earthly thought can ever undo 
A thread of hope, diamond wishes, he's out of her league  
still she dreams of wedding dresses and just one word,  

" I Do"

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Susan Lawrence August 6, 2023 at 7:45 AM I was enraptured in your words that held me through to the end . I love ~ a bath of light is vortexed in the embers of last night . Beautiful! Hugs, Susan :) Mystic Rose Rose August 6, 2023 at 3:10 PM thanks for reading Susan

Timothy Ray August 6, 2023 at 6:37 AM this is when the song "Wishin & Hopin" by Dusty Springfield brings on memories of dancing with a saguaro cactus....unrequited love is the worst-case scenario....and you have executed it well....line by line we are drawn into the dawning of the reality Mystic Rose Rose August 6, 2023 at 3:10 PM Love is the key to a happiness so is the word yes in this case,

Peter Rees August 6, 2023 at 5:19 AM Lovely thoughts. Would it was always so. Beautifully expressed. Mystic Rose Rose August 6, 2023 at 3:10 PM Yes love is amazing when it says yes to you

Vijay Pandit August 6, 2023 at 5:14 AM Highly romantic--delightfully so, Vienna. Mystic Rose Rose August 6, 2023 at 3:09 PM thanks Vijay

Regina Mcintosh August 6, 2023 at 4:16 AM Yes. I do. I still do. God bless you, Love, Gina Mystic Rose Rose August 6, 2023 at 3:09 PM smile