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The Morning

Emitting a relaxing scent At the bend of the spent night I can draw into my nostril A thrill she spreads In her picturesque figure I stretch my expectant hands For those lands of honey dew A few moments of soft release Into her sylvan peace Enough to face the wrath Of the complicated math of life Lying ahead during the day Ah, I say in satisfaction A draught of ocean All around a peace photograph She laughs A glistening china clay cup Fill up fill up Seeks the brim Moments of hymn Your reassuring eyes So serene In yellow and green My windows smile While I look at the shrub Two spotted doves In lilac love ______________________________________ 20/11/2016

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Date: 11/21/2016 1:32:00 PM
ohh, you charm me with this sweet piece, probir; wow!..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/21/2016 11:51:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/21/2016 5:37:00 AM
And so, I see you have a unique talent for involving all the senses in the joy of life. A good home life is indeed worth more than anything!!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/21/2016 11:52:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting meaningfully ...
Date: 11/21/2016 4:15:00 AM
Beautiful description and words flow so nicely...........
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/21/2016 11:53:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/20/2016 8:47:00 PM
what a beautiful love poem, Probir. I love the part about the china clay cup. It was so unique.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/20/2016 11:30:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/20/2016 12:39:00 PM
Unfolding your romantic talent you easily capture the attention of your mesmerized reader dear , Probir! A seven!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/21/2016 2:13:00 AM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 11/20/2016 11:51:00 AM
But nature can also be exotic Probir, certainly in your capable hands.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/21/2016 2:17:00 AM
Thank you ... I am humbled ...
Date: 11/20/2016 9:50:00 AM
You old romantic devil:) Lovely poem Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/20/2016 10:31:00 AM
Ha ha ha ... Thank you ... but I am a little surprised ... I wrote the poem on the theme of a beautifully fresh morning that I enjoyed so much ... None has spoken about that ... The whole romantic representation is metaphoric in nature ...
Date: 11/20/2016 8:29:00 AM
Radiant display of love's pleasure!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/20/2016 10:32:00 AM
If you feel so, that's good ... Thank you ...
Date: 11/19/2016 9:55:00 PM
I marvel at the beauty of your words Probir! You capture the essence of romance and tenderness in this beautiful piece. 7 ; )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/19/2016 10:41:00 PM
Even your little sensation of satisfaction from my poem is an elation in my windows mentioned therein ... Thank you ...

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