The Morning

Emitting a relaxing scent
At the bend of the spent night
I can draw into my nostril
A thrill she spreads
In her picturesque figure
I stretch my expectant hands
For those lands of  honey dew
A few moments of soft release
Into her sylvan peace
Enough to face the wrath
Of the complicated math of life
Lying ahead during the day
Ah, I say in satisfaction
A draught of ocean
All around a peace photograph
She laughs
A glistening china clay cup
Fill up fill up
Seeks the brim
Moments of hymn
Your reassuring eyes
So serene
In yellow and green
My windows smile
While I look at the shrub
Two spotted doves
In lilac love
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20/11/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 1:32 PM
ohh, you charm me with this sweet piece, probir; wow!..huggs
Gupta Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 11:51 PM
Thank you ...
Beaufort Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 5:37 AM
And so, I see you have a unique talent for involving all the senses in the joy of life. A good home life is indeed worth more than anything!!
Gupta Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 11:52 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting meaningfully ...
Sharma Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 4:15 AM
Beautiful description and words flow so nicely...........
Gupta Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 11:53 PM
Thank you ...
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 8:47 PM
what a beautiful love poem, Probir. I love the part about the china clay cup. It was so unique.
Gupta Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 11:30 PM
Thank you ...
Trifiatis Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Unfolding your romantic talent you easily capture the attention of your mesmerized reader dear , Probir! A seven!
Gupta Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 2:13 AM
Thank you so much ...
Murray Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 11:51 AM
But nature can also be exotic Probir, certainly in your capable hands.
Gupta Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 2:17 AM
Thank you ... I am humbled ...
Turner Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 9:50 AM
You old romantic devil:) Lovely poem Probir.
Gupta Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Ha ha ha ... Thank you ... but I am a little surprised ... I wrote the poem on the theme of a beautifully fresh morning that I enjoyed so much ... None has spoken about that ... The whole romantic representation is metaphoric in nature ...
Casto Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Radiant display of love's pleasure!
Gupta Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 10:32 AM
If you feel so, that's good ... Thank you ...
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 9:55 PM
I marvel at the beauty of your words Probir! You capture the essence of romance and tenderness in this beautiful piece. 7 ; )
Gupta Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 10:41 PM
Even your little sensation of satisfaction from my poem is an elation in my windows mentioned therein ... Thank you ...
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