Get Your Premium Membership

The Moral

Chocolate Molten Cake dessert for two Layered Devil's Food Cake fluffy and rich In the center chocolate oozes through Frozen vanilla ice cream does the trick A little to cleanse the palate of sweet Warm chocolate syrup which can bewitch Not on my diet, for a taste did cheat A huge dessert to be shared by just two Or maybe more, a few bites each can eat When shared a special dessert's fat won't rue Eaten with loved ones, savor each morsel Bid all ill effects a happy adieu If shared with all at the table, don't gobble Let sharing fairly be the story's moral Chocolate can be pronounced with two or three syllables: chaw-kuh-lit or chawk-lit Inspired by Alfred Vassallo's contest Terza Rima/about what you like Written: Monday, September 15, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/26/2014 11:52:00 AM
Beautiful Terza Rima, Sara, Chocolate is my favorite. God bless, good luck. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 9/22/2014 3:48:00 PM
Sweets for the sweet they say ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 9/19/2014 9:34:00 PM
hey, I think I missed this one somehow. And I see it is on the winners' list too. WOW. Freddie loves his chocolate, I see!! Congrats to you, Sara. I love it too.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/19/2014 8:24:00 PM
Chocolate is magic, and I experience magic everyday Sara. To share the sweet magic of life and passion is wise policy, but I claim the ladt piece. J.A.B.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/19/2014 1:46:00 AM
Wow Sara such a superb write turning sweet chocolaty in the end ! Congrats on huge win!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/18/2014 6:27:00 PM
When I leave work it's straight to the bakery! I love this, congrats and thank you for the congrats as well!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/18/2014 10:30:00 AM
Sara, congratulations..... Awesomely done. Linda
Login to Reply
Date: 9/18/2014 7:33:00 AM
Stopping back to drool again over this delicious poem Sara. Congratulations on your great winning poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/18/2014 7:05:00 AM
oh dear! i declare today as cheat day and it's all because of this delicious piece, Sara! :)) Congrats!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/18/2014 3:50:00 AM
simply delicious poem I'm drooling just reading it! many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Login to Reply
Date: 9/16/2014 2:58:00 PM
Guess what I'm craving now Sara? Shows what a great job you did writing this.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/16/2014 6:56:00 AM
- Mmmmmm..... love it,Sara !!! - Reading .... with love :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/16/2014 6:48:00 AM
A nice time reading the sweet poem...
Login to Reply
Date: 9/16/2014 1:17:00 AM
A delicious terza rima, mouthwatering poetic treat! I lovd d family table, sharing and adieu lines so much. So nice to read u again.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/15/2014 9:33:00 PM
Delicious!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/15/2014 10:01:00 AM
Very interesting thoughts penned so well on Chocolate with well crafted Terza Rima Sonnet, Sara. I just finished mine.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs