The Moonstone

The Moonstone

A cowboy, when walking out on the plains, picked up a moonstone
all written on in words of blue: Three wishes I will grant for you.
The cowboy whispered, Moonstone, you lucky moonstone,  
I wish for fame, and I wish for money,
and I wish for a woman to call me honey.

He went to the city. There he became a famous gunfighter.
His name for miles around was cried, but the cowboy wasn't satisfied.
The cowboy chuckled, Moonstone, you magic moonstone,  
I've got my fame, but I wished for money,
and I wished for a woman to call me honey.

One cold Tuesday morning he held up a bank, stole all the money.
Though he was rich and famous, too, the cowboy's greed was never through.
The cowboy boasted, Moonstone, you clever moonstone, 
I've got my fame and I've got my money,
but where is the woman to call me honey?

Along came a woman, as fair as a queen, and she called him honey.
He loved her so, he was too blind to see she was the fickle kind.
The cowboy shouted, Moonstone, you’ve done it, moonstone! 
I've got my fame and I've got my money,
and I've got me a woman to call me honey!

She ruined his name, took all his gold, ran off with a gambler.
The cowboy groaned, I see it now. It's a trick you played, and I know how.
The cowboy whimpered, Moonstone, you wicked moonstone!
You showed me fame. You showed me money.
Then you sent me the devil to call me honey.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 11:48 PM
Laura, this is a wonderfully crafted narrative poem! The recurring, evolving refrain acts as a perfect structural anchor, giving the piece the rhythmic, musical quality of a classic western ballad or folktale. The pacing of the cowboy's descent from lucky strikes to ultimate betrayal is brilliant, and that final twist on the word "honey" lands with incredible impact. It is a fantastic blend of storytelling and poetic form!
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