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The Moonlight Serenade

Moonlit sky
The splendor of your glow
So powerful, I fell to the ground.
As your love has made me so sure and enamored
Your milky glow delights my eyes, your starry eyes dance and gleam,
I’m set to forsake this life and yielding to the grandeur of your Being.

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December 19, 2014
Form : Verse
Title No. 3
Dr. Ram Mehta
First Place Win
Contest: Enchantment through A Prism by nette onclaud
Syllable Counts "63" on howmanysyllables.com

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Ralph Sergi Date: 12/31/2014 3:15:00 PM Hi Dr. Ram: beautiful choice of words . My Compliments. HAPPY NEW YEAR! Login to Reply

Reason A. Poteet Date: 12/31/2014 1:49:00 PM Deep thoughts, Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win and on your ability to put words to your thoughts. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 12/30/2014 10:40:00 PM Wow, how beautiful. Congratulations on your top win. Login to Reply

Rob Carmack Date: 12/30/2014 6:49:00 PM Dr Mehta, Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Robert Stoner Jr Date: 12/30/2014 2:08:00 PM congratulations Dr. M on your grand contest win Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 12/30/2014 1:59:00 PM Nature brings us nearer to God. Your moonlight serenade describes this so very well, poetically. Congrats on your top win. // All the best for 2015. // paul Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 12/30/2014 12:40:00 PM Congratulations on your great win Dr. Mehta. Wonderfully written. Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 12/30/2014 11:53:00 AM Congratulations Dr. Mehta on your well deserved win. I hope the New Year keeps bringing you much love and peace. All the best to you and yours. Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 12/30/2014 11:49:00 AM Excellent piece, a fav for me! Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 12/30/2014 11:37:00 AM Dr. Ram, a huge congratulations to you on your top win! Your poem presents beautiful imagery and passionate longing to merge with the grandeur of God's beauty. Sandra Login to Reply

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 12/30/2014 11:34:00 AM Wonderful Mehtasaab. Deserved this win.Regards-rajat Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 12/30/2014 11:11:00 AM such wonderful imagery Dr Mehta- many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 12/30/2014 11:07:00 AM This is good Dr. ,congrats on the win...huggs Login to Reply

Sandip Goswami Date: 12/21/2014 2:04:00 PM Super sir. I loved it. Best to you. Login to Reply

Leon Enriquez Date: 12/20/2014 11:03:00 PM Dr Ram: Nicely done. Leon Login to Reply

Lara Wash Date: 12/20/2014 11:01:00 PM Wow! Yield to the grandeur of ones being, that is awesome. That's a dynamic verse. Thank you Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/20/2014 2:13:00 PM Sweet and passionate serenade, Dr. Ram. Hope you are enjoying this christmas season. Login to Reply

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 12/20/2014 9:10:00 AM Very lovely pen Dr. Ram! Good luck in the contest dear friend. A 7 for you! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. Login to Reply