Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Verse

The Moonlight Serenade

Moonlit sky
The splendor of your glow
So powerful, I fell to the ground.
As your love has made me so sure and enamored
Your milky glow delights my eyes, your starry eyes dance and gleam,
I’m set to forsake this life and yielding to the grandeur of your Being.

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December 19, 2014
Form : Verse
Title No. 3
Dr. Ram Mehta
First Place Win
Contest: Enchantment through A Prism by nette onclaud
Syllable Counts "63" on howmanysyllables.com

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Ralph Sergi December 31, 2014 at 3:15 PM Hi Dr. Ram: beautiful choice of words . My Compliments. HAPPY NEW YEAR!

Reason A. Poteet December 31, 2014 at 1:49 PM Deep thoughts, Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win and on your ability to put words to your thoughts.

Connie Marcum Wong December 30, 2014 at 10:40 PM Wow, how beautiful. Congratulations on your top win.

Rob Carmack December 30, 2014 at 6:49 PM Dr Mehta, Congrats on your win.

Robert Stoner Jr December 30, 2014 at 2:08 PM congratulations Dr. M on your grand contest win

Paul Callus December 30, 2014 at 1:59 PM Nature brings us nearer to God. Your moonlight serenade describes this so very well, poetically. Congrats on your top win. // All the best for 2015. // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans December 30, 2014 at 12:40 PM Congratulations on your great win Dr. Mehta. Wonderfully written.

Maurice Yvonne December 30, 2014 at 11:53 AM Congratulations Dr. Mehta on your well deserved win. I hope the New Year keeps bringing you much love and peace. All the best to you and yours.

Maurice Yvonne December 30, 2014 at 11:49 AM Excellent piece, a fav for me!

Sandra Haight December 30, 2014 at 11:37 AM Dr. Ram, a huge congratulations to you on your top win! Your poem presents beautiful imagery and passionate longing to merge with the grandeur of God's beauty. Sandra

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty December 30, 2014 at 11:34 AM Wonderful Mehtasaab. Deserved this win.Regards-rajat

Jan Allison December 30, 2014 at 11:11 AM such wonderful imagery Dr Mehta- many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode December 30, 2014 at 11:07 AM This is good Dr. ,congrats on the win...huggs

Sandip Goswami December 21, 2014 at 2:04 PM Super sir. I loved it. Best to you.

Leon Enriquez December 20, 2014 at 11:03 PM Dr Ram: Nicely done. Leon

Lara Wash December 20, 2014 at 11:01 PM Wow! Yield to the grandeur of ones being, that is awesome. That's a dynamic verse. Thank you

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2014 at 2:13 PM Sweet and passionate serenade, Dr. Ram. Hope you are enjoying this christmas season.

Dorian Petersen Potter December 20, 2014 at 9:10 AM Very lovely pen Dr. Ram! Good luck in the contest dear friend. A 7 for you! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.