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The Moonlight Serenade

Moonlit sky The splendor of your glow So powerful, I fell to the ground. As your love has made me so sure and enamored Your milky glow delights my eyes, your starry eyes dance and gleam, I’m set to forsake this life and yielding to the grandeur of your Being. +++ December 19, 2014 Form : Verse Title No. 3 Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest: Enchantment through A Prism by nette onclaud Syllable Counts "63" on howmanysyllables.com

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 12/31/2014 3:15:00 PM

Hi Dr. Ram: beautiful choice of words . My Compliments. HAPPY NEW YEAR!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 12/31/2014 1:49:00 PM

Deep thoughts, Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win and on your ability to put words to your thoughts.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/30/2014 10:40:00 PM

Wow, how beautiful. Congratulations on your top win.

Rob Carmack

Date: 12/30/2014 6:49:00 PM

Dr Mehta, Congrats on your win.

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/30/2014 2:08:00 PM

congratulations Dr. M on your grand contest win

Paul Callus

Date: 12/30/2014 1:59:00 PM

Nature brings us nearer to God. Your moonlight serenade describes this so very well, poetically. Congrats on your top win. // All the best for 2015. // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/30/2014 12:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win Dr. Mehta. Wonderfully written.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/30/2014 11:53:00 AM

Congratulations Dr. Mehta on your well deserved win. I hope the New Year keeps bringing you much love and peace. All the best to you and yours.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/30/2014 11:49:00 AM

Excellent piece, a fav for me!

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/30/2014 11:37:00 AM

Dr. Ram, a huge congratulations to you on your top win! Your poem presents beautiful imagery and passionate longing to merge with the grandeur of God's beauty. Sandra