The Moonlight Fades From Flower and Rose

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*Image of Orange Rose Watered Down by Giphy. The Moonlight Fades From Flower And Rose The moonlight fades from flower and rose, A treasure laid forgotten, unfold, Tis said chaptered verses that are prose, In a limbered respite be unsold, Tossed aside to advance ways for those, Mystic stories cast oft in a hold, Moments given are moments that goes, Time is the essence ever behold, That scent of rose, lingering yet grows, Twilight's chariot sped into cold, Ere some tasselling autumn e'er shows, The redolent freshen oft so bold, The aroma lifts and shares, who knows, A refined world of the eve in gold, A young star shines on a spray of rose. 2020 March 05 *1st Place* A BRIAN STRAND FORM ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 March 05 *HMS: 15 lines x 9 syllables per = 135

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Date: 3/6/2022 10:58:00 PM
"Moments given are moments that goes, Time is the essence ever behold",.... love these lines and the truth behind them !Beautiful poem that really deserved the win... ! Congratulations dear friend !
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Hilo Poet
Date: 3/6/2022 11:07:00 PM
I'm grateful once again, Valsa, for your highlights and subsequent encouragements my friend, Aloha~William
Date: 3/6/2022 1:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. You penned a stunning vibrant Poem, William. WOW
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Hilo Poet
Date: 3/6/2022 7:43:00 AM
Thanks, Lasaad, for your wondrous expressions my friend, Aloha~William
Date: 3/5/2022 9:07:00 AM
A very beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/5/2022 10:46:00 AM
Thanks as always, Christuraj, Aloha my friend~William
Date: 3/14/2020 10:49:00 PM
You have compose a verse with fantastic flow and great imagery, William. Good luck in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/15/2020 1:17:00 AM
With my heartfelt thanks sweet, Eve, I tweedle my fingers of which one should I choose if any -- Aloha!~@wk
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