The Moon-Ed ‘i'...

Distance was increasing
in spewing rage.
I yearned for a solitude of desert
sand and rocks
away from musty tongues
and eros.

Counting my failed attempts
to reconcile with exits
and slant hopes.

Like an eclipsed moon
plying over the hill
to investigate a shorn lamb.
Plucking the hair from a beautiful scalp
to become a nun.

Arthritic  river brings back the waves.
Unreachable was the  crest.
Today standing alone on the summit
I watch the drop with grief.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
February 28, 2009 at 5:08 AM
Very wonderful imagery. I don't yet understand this form? I have only two bit of input perhaps "and scant hopes." & "prying over the hill" Light & Love Debbie
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January 6, 2009 at 5:26 AM
Wonderful job on this well written piece. Loved the first stanza a lot. This piece flowed very well.
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