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Backdoor wide open A cream moon is coming in Softly, like a dream. Beyond red sun, pearly rays in a lazy, lilac night. Howling wind whimsy 'midst the fantasy flowers in plum, pink and green. Silver moon, always welcome lending silk beauty to night.

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Date: 2/19/2024 11:09:00 AM
Hello Evelyn, a beautiful poem. My fav. Hugs. /Darlene/Hugs..
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/20/2024 1:41:00 PM
hello Evelyn, You are swelcome. my friend. Hugs./ /Darlene/
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/19/2024 8:42:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely words and fave, Darlene. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
Date: 1/25/2024 9:43:00 AM
And how much more can you take of such loveliness! Fave
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/25/2024 2:27:00 PM
Deepest thanks, my friend.
Date: 1/24/2024 8:35:00 AM
You have a wonderful way of using colors. Well done.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/24/2024 1:25:00 PM
Heartfelt thanks, dear friend.
Date: 1/22/2024 12:46:00 PM
You have a wonderful way in creating imagery.. This one is so vivid..
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/22/2024 3:02:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, Silent One. Heartfelt thanks.
Date: 1/22/2024 12:09:00 PM
- I love how you paint this in beautiful colors, Evelyn :) - hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/22/2024 3:01:00 PM
Thank you for the delight of your appreciation, Anne-Lise. :) hugs
Date: 1/22/2024 6:00:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Evelyn: A cream moon is coming in Softly, like a dream...
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/22/2024 2:59:00 PM
Thank you for your very nice comment, my friend. :)
Date: 1/21/2024 8:19:00 PM
I love the soft images. The moon, they say, is magnetic. It is captured here.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/22/2024 2:56:00 PM
I'm glad you feel the moon was captured in this poem, Hilda. Thank you so much.
Date: 1/21/2024 7:58:00 PM
Your imagery is so gripping, Evelyn. You certainly have a special talent for coloring in Nature. ~ Lost Pal Ette
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/22/2024 2:54:00 PM
Thank you for the fine compliments, Gershon. I can't resist coloring something as 'pretty as a picture.' :0
Date: 1/21/2024 7:03:00 PM
Oh what a glorious bliss it is to read your pristine poetry just in the morning, after waking up.. Gosh, it's indescribable in words how much I love this tanka poem, beautifully glowing with the spellbinding aura of Moon.. Ahh, sooo gorgeous and stunningly knitted with fascinating imagery dear Evelyn! "A cream moon is coming in Softly, like a dream", "Beyond red sun, pearly rays in a lazy, lilac night" Oh my, absolutely breathtaking! "fantasy flowers" Such softness & elegance flows in your lines
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/22/2024 2:42:00 PM
Your words fill me with happiness, dear friend. It is very nice to know you were so affected by the imagery. It is so nice to hear from you. Thank you for your gracious words and for your kind fave. My very best wishes. :)
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Date: 1/21/2024 7:04:00 PM
It's so hard not to say 'a fav' on any of your writes.. This one's again a FAVE for me, beautiful poetess.. Wow.

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