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The Moon Visitation

Backdoor wide open
A cream moon is coming in
Softly, like a dream.
Beyond red sun, pearly rays
in a lazy, lilac night.

Howling wind whimsy
'midst the fantasy flowers
in plum, pink and green.
Silver moon, always welcome
lending silk beauty to night.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

February 19, 2024 at 11:09 AM

Hello Evelyn, a beautiful poem. My fav. Hugs. /Darlene/Hugs..

Darlene De Beaulieu

February 20, 2024 at 1:41 PM

hello Evelyn, You are swelcome. my friend. Hugs./ /Darlene/

Evelyn Judy Buehler

February 19, 2024 at 8:42 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely words and fave, Darlene. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn

Kim Rodrigues

January 25, 2024 at 9:43 AM

And how much more can you take of such loveliness! Fave

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 25, 2024 at 2:27 PM

Deepest thanks, my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

January 24, 2024 at 8:35 AM

You have a wonderful way of using colors. Well done.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 24, 2024 at 1:25 PM

Heartfelt thanks, dear friend.

Silent One

January 22, 2024 at 12:46 PM

You have a wonderful way in creating imagery.. This one is so vivid..

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 22, 2024 at 3:02 PM

Glad you enjoyed it, Silent One. Heartfelt thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 22, 2024 at 12:09 PM

- I love how you paint this in beautiful colors, Evelyn :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 22, 2024 at 3:01 PM

Thank you for the delight of your appreciation, Anne-Lise. :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

January 22, 2024 at 6:00 AM

Beautiful poetry Evelyn: A cream moon is coming in Softly, like a dream...

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 22, 2024 at 2:59 PM

Thank you for your very nice comment, my friend. :)

Hilda Greenhough

January 21, 2024 at 8:19 PM

I love the soft images. The moon, they say, is magnetic. It is captured here.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 22, 2024 at 2:56 PM

I'm glad you feel the moon was captured in this poem, Hilda. Thank you so much.

Gershon Wolf

January 21, 2024 at 7:58 PM

Your imagery is so gripping, Evelyn. You certainly have a special talent for coloring in Nature. ~ Lost Pal Ette

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 22, 2024 at 2:54 PM

Thank you for the fine compliments, Gershon. I can't resist coloring something as 'pretty as a picture.' :0

Hiya Sharma

January 21, 2024 at 7:03 PM

Oh what a glorious bliss it is to read your pristine poetry just in the morning, after waking up.. Gosh, it's indescribable in words how much I love this tanka poem, beautifully glowing with the spellbinding aura of Moon.. Ahh, sooo gorgeous and stunningly knitted with fascinating imagery dear Evelyn! "A cream moon is coming in Softly, like a dream", "Beyond red sun, pearly rays in a lazy, lilac night" Oh my, absolutely breathtaking! "fantasy flowers" Such softness & elegance flows in your lines

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 22, 2024 at 2:42 PM

Your words fill me with happiness, dear friend. It is very nice to know you were so affected by the imagery. It is so nice to hear from you. Thank you for your gracious words and for your kind fave. My very best wishes. :)

Hiya Sharma

January 21, 2024 at 7:04 PM

It's so hard not to say 'a fav' on any of your writes.. This one's again a FAVE for me, beautiful poetess.. Wow.

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