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The Moon That You Can Feel With Your Heart

The moon Showering light on the earth Comes with appreciation Sympathy and love Big and bright when you're happy Stiff and cold when you're hurt Blurs out when you're lost Always look up for the moon To comfort your feelings The moon is The only one thing In the sky's darkness You can see with your eyes Feel with your heart And love with your soul Even it's the same And can be seen everywhere It may be different To the feelings Of your heart and your soul

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 8/14/2022 5:34:00 PM

Beautifully penned ~ truly, I agree the moon fills the darkest of nights and touches our hearts and souls. It is the most intimate part of the night. :)Paulette

Sai Lin Lip
Date: 8/15/2022 6:13:00 PM

Thank you.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/14/2022 5:42:00 AM

Good point of reference. In dark days, look to the moon. One lady, in the dark days, of being in a concentration camp was walking along, following the camp’s leader, in the colorless camp and saw one flower growing on the ground. She quickly picked it up, as its presence gave her hope. God bless, Sai! ~ Kim

James Marshall Goff
Date: 8/15/2022 8:24:00 PM

Cool story Kim!

Sai Lin Lip
Date: 8/14/2022 5:53:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your short story.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/14/2022 4:51:00 AM

See … feel … love ~ beautifully weaved together

Sai Lin Lip
Date: 8/14/2022 5:52:00 AM

Thank you.