The Moon Knows

great example for the contest. Soup mail

That's a great write. I hope you are doing great. Blessings

Hi Inky! Every line shines with fresh, colorful and original imagery - "lilies that glow." I love your opening - "the moon never chases stars!" What original perceptive wisdom! That one I want to ponder!! You have an awesome ability to observe the world and put it into memorable poetic lines. What a gift you are! Many thanks for sharing your gift! Blessings of health and happiness to you! I so admire your poems. They are a source of inspiration and joy for me dear friend.

The moon gets here light directly from the Sun. She's no dummy. She doesn't fall for fleeting promise. She has seen enough dreamers to know the genuine article. ~She knows her worth

Good comparison in this one. Knowing what we are worth helps us in so many ways. The moon knows. Thank you for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Superb as always :)

Very beautiful- and unique! Your work is always so special.

Beautiful. Moon now waxing is even stronger.

Beautiful. Moon now waxing is even stronger.

interesting form, though the name reminds me of an italian bread lol i think these kind of forms suit your writing..beautiful in its brevity..thanks for your comment on my latest poem, it's always a joy to read your in depth commentary :)

This is not an example for your contest, so I can see why you wrote seven lines.. this form can go on and on just like the mathematic nature of it, Pincus originally posted it as a 6 line poem, but followers and other poets decided to write longer ones.. A lot of people do stop at 8 lines with 21 syllables, it would be 44 after that and that is a very long sentence and not so poetic in so many ways.. I see you have a contest on this form and look forward to reading them.. all the best..

Hi Ink... I wanted to send you soup mail, but you don't seem to accept them. I think you need to add your 8th line to your post. I'm sure it'll be wonderful.

This is a great one to read aloud. A pretty piece.

This is pretty and inventive. I remember years back seeing contests in this form.

Oh my, our favourite moon shining so beautifully in the miridical ambience of your poem, gorgeous Ink! I absolutely love this Fibonacci as your words paint a magical scene where moon reigns the realms of cosmos and doesn't chase those stars of lilies.. Ahh, wait! 'Stars of lilies' gosh, I loveeeee it!!! Our dearest Moon knows her worth and she is above all those glamorous jewels that sing of lies, so true! This poem conveys so much metaphorical depth and personification of elements too, soo good

I am truly amazed by the profound beauty of this poem, dear Ink. The last line carries an incredible strength that resonates deeply within me. It serves as a powerful reminder that we should embrace our values and worth. This piece is not only breathtaking but also incredibly inspiring. I Loved the last 2 lines, "in sparkling gold, she knows her worth~ is more than waltzing jewels carrying crooning lies." Blessings

she knows her worth~ is more than waltzing jewels carrying crooning lies--I feel the depth of this thought. So succinct, yet powerful, Ink.

Wow this is a gem of a piece dear Ink..specially that last line is so powerful!! Loved it!

Oh wow! Deep musings here, IE, beautifully expressed

Amazing. I just love this. Breathtaking for sure. God bless you with much love and inspiration, love, Gina

Mmmm papi … how you weave gorgeous enchantments with these elements..moon never chases stars .. lilies that glow in sparkling gold..mmmm the flow … you taking me to a realm u dnt wanna leave ae papi… waltzing jewels carrying crooning lies... a fantastic frappachino aeee!!!

Wowowow! Well said !