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For the Bite Size No90 Poetry Contest of Line Gauthier

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*Line one is from a poem by Sara Teasdale *The moon is a curving flower of gold. Blue silk is the river below which gathers sweet Luna’s petal-face glow and mirrors it in a soft fold. Delight is the night as we - passion-souled - sail forth on the ribbon’s smooth flow!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/22/2024 11:48:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! thanks for this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.

Len Gasun

Date: 9/22/2024 7:08:00 AM

Enchanting image on this stellar poem my deares poet friend Andrea. I love it. Thank you so much for sharing. Congratulations on your well-deserved top win! Hugs

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/21/2024 10:23:00 PM

My, my! Another level! Absolutely love this. Warmest congratulations on your top win, Andrea, God bless

Karen Croft

Date: 9/21/2024 10:21:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/21/2024 5:11:00 AM

So wonderfully done. I love this. God bless you and Congratulations on your top win. Love, Gina

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/20/2024 10:34:00 PM

So lovely, Andrea. A huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice

Paige Hind

Date: 9/18/2024 3:38:00 PM

Gorgeous! Loved your style of writing this rhyme!

Robert Warlov

Date: 9/14/2024 11:16:00 PM

Before I read yours I went off and tried to do one but I'm not good at it. It ends with breakfast-costs complaints ~ Different strokes I guess but thanks for the inspiration.

Robert Warlov
Date: 9/17/2024 4:22:00 PM

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/15/2024 8:22:00 AM

yeah, we all have different strokes, my friend.

Joseph May

Date: 9/14/2024 1:50:00 AM

M'oonbeams gather delicate Luna petals', GL in the contest

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/13/2024 3:11:00 PM

Andrea, seems like a beautiful scene. I am amazed at how you are able to create such a place that I would like to visit. Hope you are well!!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/13/2024 4:38:00 PM

Thanks, Duke

Jay Narain

Date: 9/13/2024 10:15:00 AM

nice imagery. great write.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/13/2024 8:08:00 AM

Oh my! That opening line! Gosh! Another one thats so ethereal and the imagery flowing throughout this is beyond breathtaking and so creative’ “ The moon is a curving flower of gold. Blue silk is the river below“ i see through your words and i cant help but be in awe! “Passion-souled” that stood out for me too! I think this will do well! I absolutely loved it! Best wishes and sending you light always soul aunt ..

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/13/2024 4:39:00 PM

Thanks, Ink. I sure hope Line likes this

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/13/2024 2:09:00 AM

Lovely rhyme and imagery. A magnificent bite size poem. Loved the Luna’s petal-face glow. Best for a win. Hugs.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/13/2024 4:38:00 PM

I hope Line likes it