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(Pantoum) THE MOON IS NOT BRIGHT TONIGHT WHAT'S WRONG WITH THE MOON I WISH IT WAS REALLY BRIGHT I JUST LOVE WATCHING THE MOON. WHAT'S WRONG WITH THE MOON I MISS WATCHING IT SHINE HIGH I JUST LOVE WATCHING THE MOON PEEPING HER YELLOW FACE THROUGH. I MISS WATCHING IT SHINE HIGH WITH ALL THE CLOUDS PLAYING HIDE 'N SEEK PEEPING HER YELLOW FACE THRUOUGH SHE CAN PLAY WITH US ALL KIND OF TRICKS. WITH ALL THE CLOUDS PLAYING HIDE 'N SEEK I WISH IT WAS REALLY BRIGHT SHE CAN PLAY WITH US ALL KIND OF TRICKS THE MOON IS NOT BRIGHT TONIGHT. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 December,02,2014

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Date: 12/3/2014 1:12:00 AM
I just love watching the moon, too, and this poem was just as enchanting... I truly enjoyed this wonderful write, my friend! Very nice work, Dorian!
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Date: 12/2/2014 2:16:00 PM
wonderful imagery as ever Dorian - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/2/2014 12:02:00 PM
I enjoyed your moon poem. Every time I look at the moon I think, Neal Armstrong was actually there! The man in the moon. So hard to believe!
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