Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Pantoum

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The Moon

(Pantoum) 


THE MOON IS NOT BRIGHT TONIGHT 
WHAT'S WRONG WITH THE MOON 
I WISH IT WAS REALLY BRIGHT 
I JUST LOVE WATCHING THE MOON. 

WHAT'S WRONG WITH THE MOON 
I MISS WATCHING IT SHINE HIGH 
I JUST LOVE WATCHING THE MOON 
PEEPING HER YELLOW FACE THROUGH. 

I MISS WATCHING IT SHINE HIGH 
WITH ALL THE CLOUDS PLAYING HIDE 'N SEEK 
PEEPING HER YELLOW FACE THRUOUGH 
SHE CAN PLAY WITH US ALL KIND OF TRICKS. 

WITH ALL THE CLOUDS PLAYING HIDE 'N SEEK 
I WISH IT WAS REALLY BRIGHT 
SHE CAN PLAY WITH US ALL KIND OF TRICKS 
THE MOON IS NOT BRIGHT TONIGHT. 



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014


December,02,2014

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Kelly Deschler December 3, 2014 at 1:12 AM I just love watching the moon, too, and this poem was just as enchanting... I truly enjoyed this wonderful write, my friend! Very nice work, Dorian!

Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 2:16 PM wonderful imagery as ever Dorian - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Darlene Gifford December 2, 2014 at 12:02 PM I enjoyed your moon poem. Every time I look at the moon I think, Neal Armstrong was actually there! The man in the moon. So hard to believe!