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The Moon

Moon Big, orange Rising, glowing, forecasting Preparing for Autumn's harvest Recurring, enticing, enthralling Amazing, reflective Satellite

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 6/29/2010 3:21:00 AM
Awesome take, Virginia. This is just how I see the moon. Thanks for stopping by to read my poem. Have a great day :) -Grace
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Date: 6/26/2010 9:53:00 PM
A cool form of poetry. Very nice, Virginia. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/26/2010 3:25:00 PM
Earth's satellite moon is so grand in the fall when it appears so large and orange, Virginia. I really like the way you employ the diamante form with all the "ing" words. Very melodic and certainly a brilliant image. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/26/2010 3:24:00 PM
Well, one that mistook the moon for a satellite..Haaaaaa! Thanks for the kind comments..Sara
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