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The Moon

Moon

Big, orange

Rising, glowing, forecasting

Preparing for Autumn's harvest

Recurring, enticing, enthralling

Amazing, reflective

Satellite

natureseasonstimediamante

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Grace Eunsong Lee

June 29, 2010 at 3:21 AM

Awesome take, Virginia. This is just how I see the moon. Thanks for stopping by to read my poem. Have a great day :) -Grace

Andrea Dietrich

June 26, 2010 at 9:53 PM

A cool form of poetry. Very nice, Virginia. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

June 26, 2010 at 3:25 PM

Earth's satellite moon is so grand in the fall when it appears so large and orange, Virginia. I really like the way you employ the diamante form with all the "ing" words. Very melodic and certainly a brilliant image. Nice work! Love, Carolyn