The Mood

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Feeling moody..Sara

I am in a writing mood
But someone wants me to fix some food

I had a line that I hadn't forgot
Someone wanted me to check the clock

I love these moods when words just flow
Someone stepped on my toe

The rain pours down in continous rhyme
But right now I haven't got the thyme

The thyme slows down in January
And I can enjoy the singing Canary

Or Goldfinch as it feeds on Rebeckia
A dash of yellow on bleak cloudy Yucca

Slip out on the porch in damp and cold
Just what I need to restore my soul

Green is showing on Japanese Magnolia
Buds are popping and really acromegaly

Star Magnolia what a treat
Buds could be open in a week

But I know within my heart
Colder must come before spring starts

Out on the porch one more time
God granted me a few more rhymes

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Shirley Long

Date: 1/31/2012 9:36:00 PM

Well written poem. I enjoyed reading it and will read more of your poems. They are fascinating, you are a darn good writer. keep the good works up. I can learn some pointers from you.

L.Ruby Meyer

Date: 1/17/2012 10:01:00 AM

I really can relate to this!! thank you Sara.

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/10/2012 8:28:00 AM

Yes, beautiful poem, read just now. Enjoyed it. Disturbance happens, but in time comes out rhyme. Nicely penned. bl

M.I.A .

Date: 1/9/2012 6:30:00 PM

Sara, really can relate to this. most of what i wrote is something that just came out. I rarely can construct a poem (not talented enough i guess). but I loved the mood too. great write Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 1/9/2012 2:37:00 PM

Lovely piece on your creative thoughts time

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/9/2012 11:54:00 AM

don't slip on the porch.....wayne fell up the steps last night and ouchie....=[

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/9/2012 7:54:00 AM

Sara you are a wonder. i've never been as close to someone i've never met. when i read your poems i feel i'm there right beside. yours words are so visual. harry

Onyebuchi Okonkwo

Date: 1/9/2012 3:07:00 AM

Good rhyme scheme, Sara. Thanks for ur nice comments.

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/8/2012 9:21:00 PM

I'm glad He left you a few great rhymes! I wish He could throw some my way! Wonderful write here Sara, I love the way you integrated moods throughout each couplet, very nicely done! Awesome Work!!