The Monster Who Ate Her Chest

she opened her gown
to show me a flaming scar
something was missing...
the knife should have cut deeper
disease still raged underneath

a young life wasted
back in nineteen fifty five
a mother and wife
whose white skin turned yellow from
the monster who ate her chest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 7, 2013 at 10:31 PM
this is very Tim, one of the most impressive wins on the PINKTOBER list................ SKAT
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November 6, 2013 at 1:58 PM
Hello PINKTOBER, winning poet --- TIM --- Thank you for embracing my contest with your poem. I took my time on this particular contest, many heartfelt poems:-(... If you'd like:) stop by my latest blog "Hold My Pen While I Write." In there you will find my very own PinkTober invitation. Take Care & have yourself an awesome day... xox~ LINDA
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May 18, 2013 at 9:51 AM
Tragic tanka and uniquely done. Congrats on your win Tim. AO
Richards Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 8:35 AM
This breaks my heart Tim.....but so raw and real and should have been on the top of the list for the emotions expressed. (My mother too, died very young from pancreatic cancer....a different kind perhaps, but the pain was the same.....so I feel your poem deeply.
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May 17, 2013 at 7:31 AM
Sad and moving, congratulations on your win.
A   Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 10:11 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, TIM! Thank you for the nice and wonderful heartfelt poem about mom's. ~LOVE~ Linda
Brown Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Contankacerous" contest Tim. Love, Carol
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June 18, 2012 at 6:42 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!! GREAT WRITE!!!
Richards Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 2:44 PM
So moving is this one...for it reads as a personal story that one would never forget. I have been there with you ....only for me it was 1964.......that I saw a young life wasted...just as you did.
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June 14, 2012 at 8:00 AM
wow, I really like this one, Tim. WHen did I HIT you??hahahah. I must have been having fun. Let me know which poem!
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