The monster I tried to save

You grew up in a terrifying house
Full of screams and violence
Your father beating you and his spouse
Until it brought submission and silence

I could sense it in you
I wanted to help you, it’s true
I know that inside you there’s a hurt child
A fragile boy that became hostile

But your childhood trauma turned you into him
You became what you swore you'd never be
Your bright light slowly grew dim
Revealing the monster you hid within thee

Even so, my compassion got the best of me
I gave up all of me to save thee
In exchange, you slowly drowned me
Draining my light and life 
I didn’t know you were my enemy
The worst monster I’ve ever seen
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