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The Monster

I rode the monster at the amusement park With some trepidation I locked in my seat, Took deep breaths while starting to embark And, thought about lying to others how neat. A steep climb upward enhanced my anxiety I rode the monster at the amusement park, As we crested the top, it challenged my piety With a jerk, it earned its moniker trademark. Just over the crest I had a new second spark Of regret that I had ever mounted this beast I rode the monster at the amusement park No one could ever call me a coward, at least! From that point on, I can’t remember a thing Except the screams, the rush of air, a stark Unabated terror, a stomach-in-mouth feeling I rode the monster at the amusement park.
Written August 16, 2022

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Date: 8/16/2022 11:45:00 PM
This reminds me of the last time I rode on a roller coaster - and this will be the last time. I had no idea they go upside down two or three times now.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/17/2022 8:18:00 AM
Oh my! It has been years since I rode one, but I certainly will never do it again. That's one positive assertion I can make without reservation.
Date: 8/16/2022 10:14:00 PM
That Monster you rode I think I have been on also Milton. Been feeling under the weather lately might take a week off. Catch you later my friend...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/17/2022 8:23:00 AM
I hope it was a fun experience for you. Oh my! I hope you get to feeling better real soon. I will miss you, so keep me posted on how you are getting along.
Date: 8/16/2022 1:35:00 PM
Lol, when we were last over in Florida I had to take the grandsons on the rides, my heart missed a few beats I can tell you. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/16/2022 1:38:00 PM
It was years and years ago that I rode the Monster, and I can tell you never again!!!

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