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The Moments I Give

I gave it time, I gave it space, Now tell me what, I am suppose to do. I don’t understand you, The moments we shared, Seems all for nothing, I see the hatred in your eyes. Tell me what I am doing wrong, What I am supposed to do, Seems as if you hate me, The moments we shared, Seems in the distant past. I gave it my all, I gave you my heart, What is the next step, Is it walking away, Maybe so, maybe not. The moment I knew, The hatred in your heart, Was all for me, What else am suppose to do. The moments we shared, Seems for nothing, The nothingness is getting to me, I gave it my all, Seems like it was for nothing. The moment I stepped in, The moment I tried, All for nothing, Why try, Why give it all. Because I know I can’t give up, Because I love you with all my heart, Now tell me the next steps, Because I am about to give up on you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/7/2016 3:47:00 AM
Greetings Yvonne. Congrats for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup home page! ;-)
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Date: 12/22/2015 3:46:00 PM
Yvonne, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/21/2015 11:24:00 PM
Yvonne, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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