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it was a harrowing goodbye
his body still warm 
when they took him away

the cold embrace of death
was not to get a hold of him
until i was willing to give way 



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Date: 4/12/2025 9:28:00 PM
poignant, piercing, painful and yet we must accept what is
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Date: 4/13/2025 7:49:00 AM
yes indeed, we must find our way to make peace with it

Book: Reflection on the Important Things