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The Moment

The moment I saw you Only for a few minutes Of the site I see Never realizing my life Would change for the better of me My heart was running full speed Not being aware again We only had an hour to spare I know this may sound weird But this moment was the day I got my life on track close to the end I knew I fell madly in love When my eyes connected with yours Standing face to face It felt like something had fell Out of heaven from above This has hit me so hard Knocking me off my feet Feeling I need a few minutes to breathe Only time and space can give Cause I sense my love running So much deep Somehow for that brief moment You completely blew my mind In my eyes seeing two different people With two different personalities Seem to have different life styles But only one heart which were completely stolen In that only one moment During that one beautiful sunny winter morning I knew I fell madly in love When my eyes connected with yours Standing face to face It felt like something had fell Out of heaven from above That day I knew I had to see you Only I didn’t know how or when My heart started beating fast When you said it was nice to meet you I hope we can meet again Wow it was like a blur You caused my mind to stir The ground started to spend around Only I knew I couldn’t make a sound All I could do was to catch my breathe So I decided to take a seat and have a rest I knew I fell madly in love When my eyes connected with yours Standing face to face It felt like something had fell Out of heaven from above Oh my gosh what have you done to me I once was caged But now your words have set me free I didn’t know how to react With these feelings so bright Only I know I dream of you Each and every night I never thought someone would look at me The way I see myself in your eyes I never knew how my movement would change With you in this life time I never felt this fire burning inside of me Nor I never felt this wetness between my thighs If this feels like love I never want it to end Cause finally knew the moment When my life started to begin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/24/2016 8:29:00 PM
lakea banks, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA...
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Date: 7/28/2015 10:26:00 PM
Lakea, I enjoyed reading your poem today. Take Care. **SKAT**
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Date: 3/4/2014 11:40:00 AM
Beautiful write, Lakea! Congratulations on your fine win!!
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Date: 3/3/2014 6:19:00 PM
Congratulations Lakea on your well deserved win. Love fabulously expressed in your Ballad - Connie
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Date: 3/3/2014 6:52:00 AM
- Pleased to read your poem Lakea :)- well written about sweet love! - (I see this is the winning poems .... well deserved :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Lakea Banks
Date: 3/3/2014 3:01:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comment about my poem
Date: 3/3/2014 1:24:00 AM
Brilliant Ballad! Congrats on the fine win, lakea
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Lakea Banks
Date: 3/3/2014 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so much..
Date: 3/2/2014 9:28:00 PM
This is simply classic, congrats on the win Lakea.
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Lakea Banks
Date: 3/2/2014 10:13:00 PM
Thank you so much....
Date: 3/2/2014 7:49:00 PM
Nice way to describe the physiological changes that take place when somebody falls in love. You have covered all the bases.
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Lakea Banks
Date: 3/2/2014 8:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comment..
Date: 3/2/2014 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend LAKEA . Thank you so much for your loving support. More blessings! Love lots, Leonora
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Lakea Banks
Date: 3/2/2014 8:01:00 PM
No, thank you for your warm words & encouragement

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