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The Molten Ice Cube

the molten ice cube
appeases the cayenne-tongue -
clemency of judge

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judgementhaiku

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/11/2023 11:32:00 AM

Sudden, merciful relief! Outstanding, Kim. Congratulations on your win. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/11/2023 4:56:00 PM

Thank you, Evelyn!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/11/2023 10:01:00 AM

A very witty one Kim, congrats on your win, :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/11/2023 4:56:00 PM

Thank you, Rose!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/11/2023 2:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in my contest. I appreciate you participating. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/11/2023 5:08:00 AM

Thank you, Sara! :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/10/2023 3:13:00 PM

Back with congratulations dear Kim! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/11/2023 5:08:00 AM

Thank you, Linda!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/10/2023 11:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A fun write. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/11/2023 5:06:00 AM

Thank you, Paula!

Paige Hind

Date: 8/8/2023 4:05:00 PM

I really like your take on this!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2023 7:11:00 PM

Thank you, Paige!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/3/2023 11:52:00 AM

Knew I was in for a tasty, though spicy, treat in your haiku, Kim! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2023 12:25:00 PM

You are so kind! Thank you, Sam!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/2/2023 6:24:00 PM

Great entry - terrific last line Kim! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2023 6:54:00 PM

Thank you, my friend !

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/1/2023 3:23:00 PM

so short and wonderful, thanks a lot for the pleasure yann

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2023 8:08:00 PM

Thank you, yann!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/1/2023 2:44:00 AM

Wonderful ending line, Kim:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2023 4:36:00 AM

Thank you, Joanna!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/31/2023 9:57:00 AM

- Great written, Kim - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2023 11:03:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! I really appreciate how faithful you are to reading so much poetry on FB!

The Molten Ice Cube

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