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The Mocking Bird Sat

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                                          The Mocking Bird Sat
                                          Quizzically looking in...
                                        Broken drained bird bath






(My bird bath is 
broken..The 
Mocking Bird
sat on the rim
looking at me
in the kitchen
like he was 
asking me 
what is wrong here.)

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Michelle Mac Donald Date: 4/5/2011 3:52:00 PM O those birds don't miss a trick, Sara. I could picture it looking at you through the window, asking "what is wrong here." Gotta love those birds! Hope all's going well with you and yours. God's blessings to you all! Mikki Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 3/31/2011 6:10:00 AM yep they notice those things Login to Reply

Dana Smith Date: 3/30/2011 2:11:00 PM beautiful:) take care of yourself. Dana'lynn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/30/2011 4:30:00 AM thankxx Sara for your S.M. on this piece ... appreciate the explanation my friend.. still a lovely sight to view .. hopefully Spring will arrive and stay for a while .. hope u are enjoying blessed health and wonderful week..luv. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/29/2011 3:08:00 PM What a cool image, Sara. I can just see the mocking bird searching for the water in the bird bath and looking at you in dismay. Great haiku! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/29/2011 3:02:00 PM So appreciate your lovely comments Sara my friend.. getting to my S.M. shortly .. in between cooking for my entire family tonight luv.. Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 3/29/2011 2:59:00 PM i love poems about mocking birds and this was a great one. thank you for your comments on my poetry. Login to Reply

Carol Fillmore Date: 3/29/2011 12:01:00 PM Really like this piece, Sara, enjoyed the read today. Thanks for the comments on Raccoon Went A Wooing...and happy you got some chuckles from it! Carol Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/28/2011 1:34:00 PM Quite sentimental but very cool and humorous, Sara Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/28/2011 1:24:00 PM sara, this 'ku sends me reeling with its natural flow and sentimental coo.. love it.. hope you're good! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Manouchka Doreus Date: 3/28/2011 1:04:00 PM simple. short and sweet Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/28/2011 12:48:00 PM A sweet picture u presented Sara .. our birds are totally confused with our awful weather pattern.. we have bird houses all over and it is so cold I don't believe I even hear them singing so much ... they get used to us doing for them and I can just see the mockingbird staring at u with this questioning look on his face luv... hope it gets fixed soon.. Login to Reply