Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

The Mocking Bird Sat

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                                          The Mocking Bird Sat
                                          Quizzically looking in...
                                        Broken drained bird bath






(My bird bath is 
broken..The 
Mocking Bird
sat on the rim
looking at me
in the kitchen
like he was 
asking me 
what is wrong here.)

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Michelle Mac Donald April 5, 2011 at 3:52 PM O those birds don't miss a trick, Sara. I could picture it looking at you through the window, asking "what is wrong here." Gotta love those birds! Hope all's going well with you and yours. God's blessings to you all! Mikki

Doris Culverhouse March 31, 2011 at 6:10 AM yep they notice those things

Dana Smith March 30, 2011 at 2:11 PM beautiful:) take care of yourself. Dana'lynn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 30, 2011 at 4:30 AM thankxx Sara for your S.M. on this piece ... appreciate the explanation my friend.. still a lovely sight to view .. hopefully Spring will arrive and stay for a while .. hope u are enjoying blessed health and wonderful week..luv.

Carolyn Devonshire March 29, 2011 at 3:08 PM What a cool image, Sara. I can just see the mocking bird searching for the water in the bird bath and looking at you in dismay. Great haiku! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 29, 2011 at 3:02 PM So appreciate your lovely comments Sara my friend.. getting to my S.M. shortly .. in between cooking for my entire family tonight luv..

James Foulk March 29, 2011 at 2:59 PM i love poems about mocking birds and this was a great one. thank you for your comments on my poetry.

Carol Fillmore March 29, 2011 at 12:01 PM Really like this piece, Sara, enjoyed the read today. Thanks for the comments on Raccoon Went A Wooing...and happy you got some chuckles from it! Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta March 28, 2011 at 1:34 PM Quite sentimental but very cool and humorous, Sara

Nette Onclaud March 28, 2011 at 1:24 PM sara, this 'ku sends me reeling with its natural flow and sentimental coo.. love it.. hope you're good! :) huggs, nette

Manouchka Doreus March 28, 2011 at 1:04 PM simple. short and sweet

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 28, 2011 at 12:48 PM A sweet picture u presented Sara .. our birds are totally confused with our awful weather pattern.. we have bird houses all over and it is so cold I don't believe I even hear them singing so much ... they get used to us doing for them and I can just see the mockingbird staring at u with this questioning look on his face luv... hope it gets fixed soon..