The Moai

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Quarried,  and carved from our earthen mother's skeletal
Backbone and under belly, were the Moai solid rock deities,
Stone guardians of Easter Island.
A mystical place, a harvested paradise, but nothing remains
Of the people whom built this land of living statues, except
For these harden faces, looking towards the ocean, as if in 
Wait for their native worshipers to return.
Sit and listen my friend, to the whispering in the wind,
Do you hear the low humming sound, rolling across
The rocky and jagged surf. 
It is the Moai, calling unto the five raw elements of the world.
Let us live again, to walk among the heavens vast 
Divides, and to feel the winds breeze at our faces
Once more.
Slowly the ground shifts and moves, rumbles and
Quakes, lightening splits as thunder strikes against 
The harden ground, nature itself has heard them,
And answers their wishes with life anew.
Shedding layers textures by depths degree, piece by
Piece, stone turns into gravel, rough rock is smoothed,
Hued by mystic incantations spell, brick becomes
Bone, and nature answers their wishes with life anew.
Living giants pull themselves up out of the earth,
Shaking away debris's leavings, and thus shall
Stone breaths, inhaling freedom's fresh air at last.
Behold the living god's of Stone, guardians of
An ancient culture lost unto time itself.
But at dusk's fading sunset, the spell is thus
Broken and slowly these giant figures take
Their places once again, melting as if it
Never happened, yet the humming still
Lingers echoing across the ocean.
For stone God's never forget, and waiting
On Easter Island do they so sit, monuments
To a people whom disappeared without a trace.
But their deities shall call unto them until
One day they'll return, and then maybe 
Giants again shall walk this earth in 
Celebration, to feast amongst their people
Once more.

BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/5/2014 12:33:00 PM
19 please BBS XXOO
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Date: 9/5/2014 12:21:00 PM
hello Cheryl, I've read this poem so many times, and it never gets boring. Love LINDA, and don't think I don't miss you, I miss you much... LINDA
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Date: 9/5/2014 12:02:00 PM
I've got number 7.... Don't give it to no one... LOL
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Date: 9/5/2014 11:03:00 AM
What an extraordinary poem this is, a very powerful write from an exceptional mind, so informative, and will dwell in my head for awhile i'm sure.
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Date: 9/5/2014 2:00:00 AM
Moai ...spirit of Rapa Nui people....Easter Island... having the nature of a myth. Powerful epic effect. A major poem of CHERYL.
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Date: 9/4/2014 9:27:00 PM
hi, there, I am not sure what you are talking about with the Halloween poems but FIVE is my DAY, so I pick that number!! Hope i will understand your meaning soon!!
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Date: 9/3/2014 4:58:00 PM
thanks for the LIttle women comment I believe the oldest girl in that story is the writer, right? I am the oldest and I like how it follows that story! ok, I was getting ready to read this one and then I saw it had won and I realized I had seen it before too. BIG congrats on your honor. I see she gave you first, and it was well deserved.
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Date: 8/28/2014 12:44:00 PM
One of my favorite poems. I read as if it were a bowl of ice cream with warm chocolate sauce, upon it. It absolutely transfixed my eyes and mind. Thanks for that moment.
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Date: 8/28/2014 12:44:00 AM
wow, you did those ancients proud with THIS beauty. I remember learning of this place in junior high and I saw a movie about it too. That would be a fantastic trip to take!! Don't you think so? Have you been lucky enough to have gone there? Great poem, Cheryl.
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Date: 8/27/2014 7:31:00 PM
CHERYL, I saw a documentary on the Easter Island, and how they were able to set the stones in the position they stood. A fabulous poem. SKAT
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Date: 8/26/2014 8:48:00 PM
Hello Cheryl, now that is awesome, I feel, as if them giants will walk this earth again. I picture nature, giving them a new life... A fine and wonderful poem, my friend..LINDA
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Date: 8/26/2014 5:00:00 PM
Always colorful, always seeking, Easter Island! Thanks my friend... Light & Love
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Date: 8/26/2014 10:11:00 AM
Beautiful reminder of a people who carved these figures so many years ago. But even more impressive the imagination that gives life to these monolithic giants. Well done, Cherl. Once again...you deliver! // paul
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