The Misnomer Loss

THE MISNOMER LOSS

What is loss? 
Loose your keys?
Your manager now has less employees? 
or is it cruelly cross, 
like a fatal disease?

Did your child die
while visible to your eye?
Is justice for you nigh?
Did a flood wipe it all away,
too sudden to even ask why?

We need a much better word for these,
for losses like these are tragedies.
Not a bank error, oh please! 
Rather it's the most painful horror,
and not like missing keys.

There is no word that describes
the pain and suffering of a dead son.
You can't save him; but you get proscribes,
and when it is done -
you are not the only one,
among few knowing loss describes not demise.
Nor other suffering that applies
to loss, which lies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 8:09 AM
seth itis a great poem even though it is sad.
Godwin Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 8:53 PM
Great theme, great closer - and the wonderment is palatable ... CayCay
Andresen Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 2:46 PM
- A moving and great poem, Seth - hugs // Sun :)
Diamond Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Gee I'd really like your comment on my other poems too. The poems pertaining to my play script are noted act 2 ect, but the rest are wanting for comments.
Duet Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 1:16 AM
So true, Seth. No words are enough to describe certain kinds of pain...only tears remain. Good poem. And, thank you for introducing me to Poetry Soup. I am here too now.
Diamond Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Gee I'd really like your comment on my other poems too. The poems pertaining to my play script are noted act 2 ect, but the rest are wanting for comments.
Diamond Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Hey Carol! You might want to check out the poetry contests. I just entered the footbridge poem contest. I would love to hear your opinion. As always, SMD
Smith Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 7:59 PM
Very nice piece Seth..
Diamond Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Gee I'd really like your comment on my other poems too. The poems pertaining to my play script are noted act 2 ect, but the rest are wanting for comments.
Fedele Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 1:10 PM
Good work!
Diamond Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 3:58 PM
Gee I'd really like your comment on my other poems too. The poems pertaining to my play script are noted act 2 ect, but the rest are wanting for comments.
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