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The Mirrored Image

the image I see
reflections of a façade
believed to be true
by those that I meet
you should have looked much deeper

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Carol Sunshine Brown

August 26, 2009 at 5:31 AM

I am so happy to be able to read your amazing poetry today J.B . I thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

August 25, 2009 at 8:12 PM

"You would have seen true" :) Felt inspired to add this one line, just to complete 5-7-5 syllable count and thus complete the poem, which I liked very much. We do show facade and we hope that someone we care about we look deeper and find the true person, but why not show the true person? Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

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