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The Mirrored Image

the image I see reflections of a façade believed to be true by those that I meet you should have looked much deeper

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/26/2009 5:31:00 AM

I am so happy to be able to read your amazing poetry today J.B . I thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 8/25/2009 8:12:00 PM

"You would have seen true" :) Felt inspired to add this one line, just to complete 5-7-5 syllable count and thus complete the poem, which I liked very much. We do show facade and we hope that someone we care about we look deeper and find the true person, but why not show the true person? Thanks for sharing. Caroline.