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The Mirror

Confusion seeps in, Next comes doubt. Is this happiness, Is this what love is all about? Please tell me i'm wrong, tell me its all in my head. Darling I cant fight, my thoughts win on this bloody night. My hand finds the knife, my mind whispering that nothing is all right. the mirror broke in front of me, i'm counting my breath. I'm falling fast now, the blade is weeping. You're haunting my reflection, the devil here for collection. God forgive me, I plunge the knife into the glass, my body erupts in pain, the knife plunged like a rock, into this broken vein. I heard the deep laughs, I heard satan sing. With one final scream I greeted Hells eternity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/4/2014 4:48:00 AM
Very intense my dear friend Sarah! A 7 from me! Enjoy the day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Date: 12/4/2014 12:35:00 AM
Good work, not sure if I am interpreting it correctly but I think I appreciate where it's going, keep on it.
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Date: 12/3/2014 11:30:00 PM
Powerful poem, I loved the ending. Hope everything is well. -Marielle
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