The Mirror

As I look over my life 
There’s a lot of people I could blame 
Of things that happened to me. 
It’s not worth it though 
So I keep my thoughts in my dreams… 
Instead I will face the mirror on myself 
As I look in the mirror 
I have lost the very essence of me 
I am invisible to the world 
My voice has no voice 
No pulse 
So u know I can’t breath 
Where did I go wrong? 
Why has life hurt me? 
Or was it I that made these choices 
Forced into adulthood so earlY 
Unable to experience the freedom of life 
The mirror never lies 
It only shows what it sees 
Take a look in the mirror and when you do 
Will u see what I see?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 24, 2016 at 9:04 PM
andrea baker, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA...
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July 27, 2015 at 3:36 PM
ANDREA, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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May 25, 2011 at 1:27 AM
Wow. Nice one! I think lots of people don't realize this fact - great theme. This kind of inspired me a little. Thanks for sharing :)
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May 24, 2011 at 6:51 PM
I love this poem what an awesome theme. Wowa!!! Gave you a 7, well deserved!!!!!
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