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The Mirror

As I look over my life There’s a lot of people I could blame Of things that happened to me. It’s not worth it though So I keep my thoughts in my dreams… Instead I will face the mirror on myself As I look in the mirror I have lost the very essence of me I am invisible to the world My voice has no voice No pulse So u know I can’t breath Where did I go wrong? Why has life hurt me? Or was it I that made these choices Forced into adulthood so earlY Unable to experience the freedom of life The mirror never lies It only shows what it sees Take a look in the mirror and when you do Will u see what I see?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/24/2016 9:04:00 PM
andrea baker, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA...
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Date: 7/27/2015 3:36:00 PM
ANDREA, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/25/2011 1:27:00 AM
Wow. Nice one! I think lots of people don't realize this fact - great theme. This kind of inspired me a little. Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 5/24/2011 6:51:00 PM
I love this poem what an awesome theme. Wowa!!! Gave you a 7, well deserved!!!!!
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