The Miraculous Sky Dive

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Written 3rd December 2024

Soon festive time will arrive To remind us that Christ’s alive Celebrate the birth With much joy and mirth Praise the miraculous sky dive.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/10/2024 2:32:00 AM

Enjoyed your limerick. It is Christmastime and a lovely write to accompany it.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/9/2024 8:07:00 AM

Beryl, nice that you can use what we normally conceive of but flowing in the opposite direction. You have a talent for turning things up-side down. It causing a great deal of thinking about perspective and feeling. Smiles!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/9/2024 9:24:00 AM

Thanks a lot for that Duke, smiles returned… Beryl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2024 12:24:00 AM

Cute one for Christmas, Beryl.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/9/2024 9:22:00 AM

Thank you Andrea… Beryl

John Read

Date: 12/8/2024 9:46:00 AM

Hi sister Beryl, as Tom says the true meaning of Christmas is long forgotten, loved your limerick. xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/8/2024 12:51:00 PM

Thank you brother John, Christmas is about celebrating the gift of the birth of Christ, not the presents bought for a price. Sis Beryl xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/4/2024 11:46:00 PM

Shame that many don't know the true meaning of christmas Beryl. Its all about money and greed now. Shops starter selling tat in October. Tom

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/5/2024 12:32:00 AM

Very true Tom, it’s not so much about church bells ringing to welcome Christ’s birth, it’s more about tills tingling for all they’re worth… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/4/2024 12:18:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Few words with much said... Have a wonderful day writing away............

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/4/2024 2:16:00 PM

Thank you Paula. Have a wonderful writing away day yourself… Beryl