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Written 3rd December 2024

The Miraculous Sky Dive

Soon festive time will arrive
To remind us that Christ’s alive
Celebrate the birth
With much joy and mirth
Praise the miraculous sky dive.

Copyright © Beryl Edmonds | Year Posted 2024

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Victor Buhagiar

December 10, 2024 at 2:32 AM

Enjoyed your limerick. It is Christmastime and a lovely write to accompany it.

December 9, 2024 at 8:07 AM

Beryl, nice that you can use what we normally conceive of but flowing in the opposite direction. You have a talent for turning things up-side down. It causing a great deal of thinking about perspective and feeling. Smiles!

December 9, 2024 at 9:24 AM

Thanks a lot for that Duke, smiles returned… Beryl

Andrea Dietrich

December 9, 2024 at 12:24 AM

Cute one for Christmas, Beryl.

December 9, 2024 at 9:22 AM

Thank you Andrea… Beryl

December 8, 2024 at 9:46 AM

Hi sister Beryl, as Tom says the true meaning of Christmas is long forgotten, loved your limerick. xx

December 8, 2024 at 12:51 PM

Thank you brother John, Christmas is about celebrating the gift of the birth of Christ, not the presents bought for a price. Sis Beryl xx

December 4, 2024 at 11:46 PM

Shame that many don't know the true meaning of christmas Beryl. Its all about money and greed now. Shops starter selling tat in October. Tom

December 5, 2024 at 12:32 AM

Very true Tom, it’s not so much about church bells ringing to welcome Christ’s birth, it’s more about tills tingling for all they’re worth… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith

December 4, 2024 at 12:18 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Few words with much said... Have a wonderful day writing away............

December 4, 2024 at 2:16 PM

Thank you Paula. Have a wonderful writing away day yourself… Beryl

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