George Yiorgos Stathakis Poet Quatrain

The Mind's Perspective

a long time ago
during a moment in time
the subject of mortality
did cross the mind

then many years later
the mind concluded how it must be
it said, "the body leaves soul
and disappears into a world of eternity"

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M. L. Kiser January 11, 2022 at 4:03 PM That sums it all up rather nicely; enjoyed. George Yiorgos Stathakis January 13, 2022 at 8:57 AM Thank you M.L. Peace

Mystic Rose Rose June 10, 2021 at 6:18 PM its a beautiful moment of grace when that happens, :) George Yiorgos Stathakis January 13, 2022 at 8:58 AM So very truth. Take care Mystic.

Beryl Edmonds June 8, 2021 at 11:30 AM Wonderful George! A poet’s time on earth is their verse, time in eternity is the poet’s poetry… Belle George Yiorgos Stathakis June 10, 2021 at 2:17 PM So true. Thank you Belle.

C L Sivaranjani June 8, 2021 at 10:04 AM The mortality and eternity, body and soul, wonderful expression of the mind's point of view George Yiorgos Stathakis June 10, 2021 at 2:17 PM Thank you CL.

Darlene De Beaulieu May 25, 2021 at 12:38 PM Hello George, Stathakis,I would have thought the soul leaves the body. Hope all is well with you. enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu May 26, 2021 at 11:14 AM Hello George, yes it is the minds perspective. I will you do the same. Enjoy your day my friend. George Yiorgos Stathakis May 25, 2021 at 7:54 PM Hi Darlene. Yes, true. But it’s the mind’s perspective. Take care.