The Minds' Eye

Thank heaven for my imagination
It's given me quite alot
Danced me through many a situation
Saved me from battles fought

Within my mind lies beauty and grace
Splendor in this world
No need to condemn or ever debase
My fist remains uncurled

Through the window of my eye
I find such wondrous things!
I smell the salty tide flow by
Skip along Saturns' rings

I've visited lots of exotic lands
Built toys with Santas' elves
Played in many rock and roll bands
Conversed with dolls on shelves

Through the imaginings of my mind
I'm driving a fancy car
Or maybe I'm being wined and dined
By a famous movie star

Imagination's an awesome thing
So much that you can do
Fly away on an angel wing
If only you've a mind to!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/28/2010 12:21:00 AM
Deb, even at my age I can remember playing "Play like" when I was a kid. Thank you for the write. Charles
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Date: 9/26/2010 11:32:00 AM
Indeed, in your mind lies beauty and grace
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Date: 9/24/2010 2:13:00 AM
This has rhythm and rhyme divine ... really enjoyed the read thanks for your comment on my poem its much appreciated love and hugs Jayne x
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:34:00 AM
It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Deb. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2010 6:31:00 AM
great write...so true! We can transport ourselves to other worlds in our minds.
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Date: 9/22/2010 9:39:00 PM
Hey, this is a great write on your fancy, Deb. I really like it. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/22/2010 5:53:00 PM
Ps. Smile ~ Oh, "Yes," &, if "Lovely Carolyn Devonshire" can dream about Brad Pitt then, I can surely dream about, "Beautiful Winona Ryder!!!" ~ Smile, "Bye Again 'Dear, Lovely Deb Wilson!'":) ~
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Date: 9/22/2010 5:42:00 PM
Smile ~ I love "Your Splendors" second stanza I believe the most although, the entire piece, is "A Beautiful Painting; 'Sooo Very Lovely;' A Fave'" ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You Always &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Blessed & Beautiful Tomorrow 'Dear, Lovely Deb Wilson,' Amid The Twain Candlelights Soft Glowings of, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear Precious Lady!":) ~
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Date: 9/22/2010 5:32:00 PM
Smile ~ "I Really Truly Deeply Love This, 'Beautiful Poem, Dear Lovely Deb Wilson!!!'" ~ "Thank You" for stopping by today dear lady for, I was hoping one day that "Your Beauty" would ~ And "Yes," without the wonderous faith of "A Beautiful Child" that All things can be then, how can We behold the hope of "A Promise" ~ Smile, I hope that "Your Treasures" are enjoying either a glorious day & or evening or, beautiful dreams, filled with beautiful scenes ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 9/22/2010 5:17:00 PM
Imagination is the greatest nation on earth...Enjoyed the reading of your words..Keep the creativity flowing from the gifted pen..Sara
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Date: 9/22/2010 3:19:00 PM
We didn't have a lot of material things when I was a kid, Deb, but my sister and I used our imaginations to the fullest. Now about that mvie star -- do you think you could send Brad Pitt my way, or should I just conjure up a clone in my own imagination? Enjoyed your upbeat poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:50:00 PM
It is amazing as much as your write... Its what drives us Poets to where we are...lovely write ....always Michael
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