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The Mind of a Serial Killer Iv

My sweet Divine it's been to long and now it's time to play for in my domain I will put you on display Your lover gave you red roses I bring you white and on my side I carry the sleek and silver knife While you were in the mart I slipped inside your car for tonight you will become the star The dress of beauty has been laid out with my own fingers I did create I rub the seats so plush and oh so soft I must focus and not get lost in my thoughts Your smell is everywhere as I lower to prepare I know you may get scared but you will love my lair I kiss and lick the fabric a taste of your sweet scent sending chills of small currents I do not resent Holding back my tears knowing our love will never disappear for in the end you will volunteer So graceful and so genteel you slide behind the wheel as you start your journey home not knowing your fate has been sealed I sneak up to peer........your eyes and I make contact in the little rear view mirror Do You Feel Me? Do You Want More? T Reams 3/26/2015 Part 4 The story line will continue

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Date: 6/1/2016 9:52:00 PM
I'm never getting in a car with you! ;-) Interesting with a myriad of possibilities....
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:58:00 PM
superb Tammy hugs 7
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Date: 7/24/2015 5:20:00 PM
Thanks again Shadow again for your nice comment!
Date: 4/3/2015 3:25:00 AM
Love this write Tammy, I wrote one called Twisted Love . Happy Easter :)
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Date: 4/3/2015 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Debbie for the comment. I want to check out your Twisted Love.
Date: 4/2/2015 9:17:00 AM
You have done a masterful job, let me know when you write the next one.
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Date: 4/2/2015 10:59:00 AM
Either today or Friday 5 will be coming. Thanks for reading.
Date: 3/31/2015 3:34:00 AM
Absolutely love the story you're building, more more more please!
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Date: 3/31/2015 1:34:00 PM
Thank you so much jimi! Part 5 will be done sometime this week. Hope to do about 25 total. It's not going to be easy to keep this somewhat clean!
Date: 3/26/2015 3:10:00 PM
Excellent pen Tammy! You've painted a very good scary picture of a degenerated mind here,very scary dark and profound piece, dear friend. Great read! A 7 from me! Thank you for sharing! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :-) D."
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Date: 3/26/2015 7:27:00 PM
Thank you very much for the nice comment. God bless you also!

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