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The Mind Is Trying

The mind is trying On different disguises Hoping for relief I am going back to bed To force myself into Some healthier sleep

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Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/23/2019 6:59:00 PM

I'm glad you're trying to rest... most of the time that's the best thing to help us heal (if & when we can stand it!).

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/20/2019 12:16:00 PM

There's nothing like going back to bed. Well said.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2019 12:41:00 AM

I am up and down, down and up wondering which one feels healthier at that second.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/16/2019 10:21:00 AM

Sometimes sleep works sometimes it doesn’t. It’s good that you keep trying.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2019 12:41:00 AM

I am trying so hard to be well. A weird malady has visited me and caused me lots of grief this week.