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The Mind Drifts

The mind drifts free-floats gaily far, far from its moorings lighter-than-air Associations stream in-and-out on ribbons, wisps of lazy strings hanging from rose-colored kites Dark forces loom yet undetected thoughts breathlessly racing beyond our tenuous grasp

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 4/17/2020 1:31:00 PM
Perhaps if I close my eyes for just a moment I can be right there with you. Ah heck who am I kidding I am a daydreamer from way back. My grasp always being a bit tenuous. Enjoyed. Thanks for your drifting mind.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/17/2020 5:48:00 PM
You, me, and the Drifters, I guess. LOL. Thanks, Kenneth.
Date: 4/12/2020 9:46:00 PM
I am ready for a long wonderful daydream and overdue; this missive reminds and coaxes me.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/13/2020 1:50:00 PM
'What a day for a daydream,' as the Spoonful used to croon! ~ gw
Date: 4/12/2020 8:56:00 PM
Hello Gershon … if your verse represents day dreaming then I am guilty - thanks Gershon - Lindsay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/13/2020 1:49:00 PM
Haha! I'm equally guilty... Now where was I? ~ Cheers, Gershon
Date: 4/12/2020 7:30:00 PM
There's danger everywhere...liked your interpretation of the drifting mind...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/13/2020 1:49:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo! ~ gw