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The Mind Also Weeps

A silhouette on the edge of the mind Finds the abyss from love's hurt and deceit Counting the reasons as if to remind To find the sky where anguish and pain meet This spinning portal on its chosen plane Turns and turns until there is no way out Time infused rushes fill the blood and brain Lost in an illusion, all is in doubt This ache from lost love becomes its own hell To leave a foul smell from love's dung-lit pyre That causes my pangs to bubble and swell As memories from love burn in a fire Their smoke will rise through the mind's dark cosmos Their ash turns cold to evoke my pathos 4/22/21 contest Writing Prompt- Ache sponsor Constance La France

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Date: 4/26/2021 10:24:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent through this muse of yours. God bless you.
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Date: 4/26/2021 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations, Frederic. Your poem is certainly worthy of the top place in this contest. Exceptionally well-done; an awesome write.
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Date: 4/26/2021 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your top spot win with this wonderful sonnet Frederic, well done... Belle
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