The Mind Also Weeps

A silhouette on the edge of the mind
Finds the abyss from love's hurt and deceit
Counting the reasons as if to remind
To find the sky where anguish and pain meet
This spinning portal on its chosen plane
Turns and turns until there is no way out
Time infused rushes fill the blood and brain
Lost in an illusion, all is in doubt
This ache from lost love becomes its own hell
To leave a foul smell from love's dung-lit pyre
That causes my pangs to bubble and swell
As memories from love burn in a fire
Their smoke will rise through the mind's dark cosmos
Their ash turns cold to evoke my pathos

4/22/21
contest Writing Prompt- Ache
sponsor Constance La France
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Agustin Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 10:24 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent through this muse of yours. God bless you.
Hankins Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 9:59 PM
Congratulations, Frederic. Your poem is certainly worthy of the top place in this contest. Exceptionally well-done; an awesome write.
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April 26, 2021 at 1:40 PM
Congratulations on your top spot win with this wonderful sonnet Frederic, well done... Belle
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