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The Might of Gentleness

Waterfall... 

Mighty roar... 

Gentle mist.




~Form is Ellip~

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David Williams

March 7, 2013 at 1:17 PM

belated congrats on your win...David

Debra Squyres

March 5, 2013 at 7:53 AM

Felt the mist of the waterfall... well done and congrats on your HM in the contest !!

Barbara Gorelick

March 5, 2013 at 7:33 AM

Thats exactly how it is! congrats. BG

Lori Lucas Mcclure

March 5, 2013 at 5:40 AM

Congratulations on your win with this amazing ellip! Lori

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

March 5, 2013 at 2:01 AM

Congrats on your HM Isaiah, I am envious of all those that tried this and placed xx

Audrey Haick

March 4, 2013 at 11:44 AM

Congratulations on your very fine win, Isaiah. Always, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

March 4, 2013 at 10:12 AM

nice win... always~ LINDA

Connie Gildersleeve

March 4, 2013 at 7:10 AM

Congrats on your win. Connie

... Gigno

February 28, 2013 at 8:32 PM

!!!

Andrea Dietrich

February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM

yours is AWESOME

Carrie Richards

February 14, 2013 at 11:48 AM

First of all........many thanks for the helpful comment on my "thee and thou' poem. You were right on....my phrase made much better use of vintage poetry....!! I really appreciate any critique that will help me grow as a poet....thank you!! Also, your haiku is perfect! I am still making errors in haiku poetry, and with Debbie's turtoring, I'm a work in progress. You seem to have succeeded. !!

Debbie Duncan

February 14, 2013 at 11:09 AM

simple awesome,,,,, for such little words, happy valentine's day Isaiah, ;}

Charmaine Chircop

February 14, 2013 at 8:35 AM

Wow..I do love the imagery of this post.You did it..with honours:)Re my chickadee haiku..I don t kill the cow but i do eat the mooB-)..Sorry to all vegeterians.