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The Midnight Hour

In our old age reminiscing Of moonlight and midnight kissing We'll talk of today’s sweet memories Beneath gnarled branches of our favourite tree Recalling the cuddles and the dancing Of moonlight and midnight romancing, Those memories are imprinted on my mind In my heart its midnight all the time. Velvet blue sky with diamond like stars No on can explain a love like ours Time passes like there is no tomorrow Midnight dreams can cause us sorrow Reminding us of days gone past Of hopes and dreams that didn’t last True love has kept our spirits free Together forever for eternity Though the darkest hour can sometimes disappoint Midnight can also inspire and rock the joint Encouraging romantic couples to dance and sing Face up to everything that life can bring Yes, we'll dance in that midnight rain Twist and shout and then twist again In the certain knowledge that one day soon We'll share a midnight honeymoon 12th June 2014 Written for Contest 'The Midnight Hour' sponsored by Kelly Deschler ~Awarded 2nd place~

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Date: 7/10/2014 5:19:00 PM
ahhh romance i seem to remeber it. Just wonderful beautiful too. I enjoyed it very much. well done. Pete.
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Date: 7/10/2014 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Peter I am so lucky to have such a romantic guy like Darren to write with I am truly the luckiest lady in the world he inspires me so much in our writes together and on my own page. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 6/29/2014 9:18:00 PM
this speaks to my generation. Very nice and Im glad it got a top spot. BG
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Date: 6/30/2014 1:02:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Barbara. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 6/29/2014 6:27:00 PM
I really enjoyed this recalling of romantic memories at midnight. Wonderful rhyme and flow to this piece. Lovely work, Jan and Darren! Congratulations to both of you on your win!
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Date: 6/30/2014 1:01:00 AM
wow thanks Kelly I didn't realise the contest had been judged :-) Many thanks for running such a super contest. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 6/16/2014 1:54:00 PM
this is as a sentimental as it can get...i am swooning!.. huggs
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Date: 6/16/2014 2:06:00 PM
aww Nette I am so pleased you like it. Darren and I continue to write verse by verse with no discussion about what comes next - quite awesome for two people who only met on here a few short sweet months ago and are now truly the very best of friends :-) Hugs as ever Jan xxxx
Date: 6/12/2014 7:06:00 PM
You rocked this midnight hour... I lobed how you danced in the midnight rain....hugs Tim
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Jadazzle United
Date: 6/13/2014 1:42:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment - as ever Tim you are here to support us. We do appreciate it. Hugs Jan & Daz xxx

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