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The Meta 4's

once met...
a force blooms
and

metaphors met...
a'fore are
the

meta force and...
meta farse that
are

metas for the...
meta-force we've
woven

meta-four forces...
met a'fore as
space-time


stan sand

spacetimefree verse

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John Loving Iii

June 6, 2023 at 11:47 AM

still looking for the metiforical.

Sand Blown

June 6, 2023 at 3:13 PM

...the force of a flower blooming reminds us of such past scenes where-in a flower showed its pluses and minuses that imperfectly reflected a natural 'ideal' bloom... ..such imperfections in nature are what we see as growth constants that are variables and upon which nature depends for its 'evolutionary adaptations' when changes occur...such as pollution......stan

David Kavanagh

June 5, 2023 at 11:48 AM

If only the 4 natural forces would come together in a (GUT) as easily as you make this wonderful metaphoric word play seem Stan, space-time might make a lot more sense, nicely worked out, cheers David

Sand Blown

June 5, 2023 at 2:45 PM

...wowza man....thanks for the comment...i'd not thought my wording was that clear....our space-time be an/our illusion wrt our perceptive ability's limitations.....stan

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