The Mermaid and the Moon

She climbed the liquid staircase
just to gaze at gleaming stars;
all she wanted was a wee one
to light up her fair boudoir.

A thousand times she spied them
flash across the midnight sky;
she strained so high to catch one,
but the mermaid could not fly.

Exhausted with hard striving,
she lay back against the sea,
rocking on the waves, gently, 
as she rested peacefully.

The moon, climbing his set arc,
saw her glistening on the foam;
at first sight so madly loved 
her, longing to take her home.

To lightly comb her flowing
hair, he sent a small moonbeam,
who tangled in her tresses
and woke her from her dream.

With a flash, her glittering tail
slapped the water and she fled,
sliding down in the ocean,
hiding in her pearl lined bed.

The moon, absent one moonbeam,
wanders heaven, round and round,
surveying seas and oceans,
praying his mermaid is found.

Sometimes in the deep, dark pool
he sees a shining light start
beneath the frothing billows,
and he clutches for his heart.

Forever in his orbit...
she, forever in the waves,
her hair with his beam glowing,
all of love he ever gave.

Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright, May 31, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/17/2014 10:26:00 PM
Faye, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:07:00 PM
This was one of my favorites ...Congrats on your win Faye
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Date: 8/17/2014 8:40:00 PM
Big congrats on your win. I really loved this write my friend. "The moon, absent one moonbeam, Wanders heaven, round and round, Surveying seas and oceans, Praying his mermaid is found." Solid gold!!!
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Date: 6/12/2014 12:12:00 PM
This was so beautiful and the imagery just breathtaking!
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Date: 6/12/2014 12:11:00 PM
This was so beautiful and the imagery just breathtaking!
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Date: 6/9/2014 8:09:00 PM
Beautiful and well written.
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Date: 6/2/2014 7:41:00 PM
That my friend is a majestic write!!! BBBBBravo!!!!!!!
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Faye Gibson
Date: 6/3/2014 7:52:00 AM
Thank you, Robert. You are such a great cheerleader. Lol. I really appreciate the attention you have paid to my efforts.
Date: 6/1/2014 10:02:00 AM
Simply beautiful...Splendid write..
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Faye Gibson
Date: 6/3/2014 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph, for your kind visit to my mermaid and your comments.
Date: 5/31/2014 4:53:00 PM
Wowww!!! What an amazing story you unveiled in your poem. Just love the "miscommunication" between the mermaid and the moon. Perhaps one day, he will find her again and she will learn that it is a moonbeam that rested in her hair. So beautiful, Faye! This will be a winner for sure. Have a great weekend, Carolyn
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Faye Gibson
Date: 6/3/2014 7:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Carolyn, You are such a kind souper and spread your sunshine all around. I am glad you like my mermaid...I kind of fell in love with her myself. ;-D
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