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The Merging

Dark wings bridge dawn's space To clutter skies in dream's light Faith and flight embrace

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/1/2010 5:07:00 PM

and feathered shadows leave cut paper traceryon an indigo sky

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 4/17/2010 5:39:00 AM

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James Peranteau

Date: 4/14/2010 7:50:00 AM

Awesome poem L'nass ! I don't really keep up with the contests, yet when I find a poet has accomplished their dream, it brings joy to me ,for the joy of an artist has its own songs and rewards ! Congratulations ere Sir ! james

James Fraser

Date: 4/11/2010 6:01:00 AM

L'nass, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2010 10:56:00 PM

Very powerful. Congratulations! Luv Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/10/2010 4:52:00 PM

I saw horror and darkness..Hitchcocks the birds (shiver) Light & Love my champion

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/10/2010 12:22:00 AM

i read this twice. to really get in my mind. and think on it for a moment. i like it, your last line is even more powerful than words. only a feeling of enlightment can be said.congrats to you, this poem deserved it. -Always&Forever Lynette

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/9/2010 9:50:00 PM

Congratulations L'Nass, nice imagery here. well done....Margaret

Date: 4/9/2010 5:04:00 PM

Wow! The imagery works so well! Love the last line. Congratulations on your win! Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Gareth James

Date: 4/9/2010 4:57:00 PM

Lovely...in fact Glorious!!! Such beauty in your words.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/9/2010 2:49:00 PM

Congrats L'Nass on your winning poem and placement in Raul's contest.. an excellent write and win for u to so enjoy...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2010 2:34:00 PM

Excellent haiku that gives meaning to the photo. Congratulations, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/9/2010 11:22:00 AM

Sorry that I missed this one before the contest was judged...Congratulations on the win with this fine work....Keep the creative pen flowing.. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my recent writes..Sara

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/9/2010 11:06:00 AM

L'nass, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

Royal Trevino

Date: 4/9/2010 10:13:00 AM

delightful write:)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/9/2010 6:20:00 AM

enjoyed