The Medusa Touch

What have I done? She wonders…
Brittle blue gaze riveted on her lover’s chiseled features
His is a face set in stone
Eyes, mouth, jaw; all fixed, grim – a granite façade
Where has the softness gone?
That tender dawning of affection…
The loving gleam in dark chocolate eyes…
What have I done to erase it? She wonders -
Because she knows it was her doing
Knows it instinctively;
The knowledge is engrained in every fiber of her being
It was she, who else, who turned that face into rock,
It was she who wiped away the smile, the glow
Her cursed ire, her impatience, her irascible self-destructive streak –
With these tools she chipped away at him until he splintered
Yes she has broken him; 
Broken the one thing she loved in all the world
Medusa-like, her willful cerulean glare turned him to stone
Now his eyes are twin pebbles
Cool, hard, unforgiving;
A grating stare is all he has to offer her
His heart sits motionless, a hunk of marble in the cage of his ribs
Beating for her no longer
His love for her has died a frigid death; drowned in a sea of ice
No more the fluid caresses, the warm grins, the ruffling of her hair
No more, no more, his love for her…
It is an unfeeling and frigid monument now
A tombstone, a dusty memory, the rattling chill of the Reaper’s breath
She has turned him into stone
Her lover - and her love - is no more
Oh Medusa, Medusa my girl, what have you done?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Voorhees Avatar
February 15, 2009 at 12:28 PM
Congratulations! I really liked this poem when I first read it....being featured is well deserved! I hope it motivates you to keep writing and share your beautiful talent! love, Steve
Jordan Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 4:56 PM
Amy - Sometimes hon life just turns us that way - Very well written piece that expressed your emotions well, Congrats on being featured - God Bless, MJ
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February 10, 2009 at 10:03 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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February 10, 2009 at 6:00 AM
Congrats Amy, on "The Medusa Touch" being featured. Vince
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February 10, 2009 at 4:34 AM
This was excellent, and a wonderful moral for anyone who is in a relationship. You expressed it very well and I love how you gave the example of Medusa, perfect. Congrats on being featured this week, it was well deserved! I am faving this. :) Love, another Amy LOL
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February 10, 2009 at 3:56 AM
thank you so much guys for your wonderful compliments, i am profoundly grateful to you all, and very honoured that my poem was featured :D
Mason Avatar
February 9, 2009 at 1:50 PM
Powerful, interesting and original write here, Amy and a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
Curcio Avatar
February 9, 2009 at 9:31 AM
OOoh - Great analogy of having the Medusa touch and turning him to stone. Congrats on this poem being featured
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February 8, 2009 at 6:07 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on being featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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January 21, 2009 at 3:10 PM
I welcome you to POETRYSOUP where you are amongst great company. I invite you to read some of my work...Raul
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