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The Mechanics

Three dimensional This conceptual framework Is what we call space

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Jan Allison

Date: 9/4/2014 12:41:00 PM

many congrats on your win James:-) hugs Jan xxx

James Fraser
Date: 9/4/2014 3:51:00 PM

Thank you Jan, isn't Space wonderful, James :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/4/2014 7:12:00 AM

Space nicely defined, James. congrats

James Fraser
Date: 9/4/2014 3:49:00 PM

Be like me and close your eyes. Drift, drift, through cloudless skies. Enter out to the dark beyond, for I desire the day, a signal transponds. Thank you Dr. Ram - James.......

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/4/2014 5:10:00 AM

Congrats on your win James!

James Fraser
Date: 9/4/2014 3:40:00 PM

Like New York in a way, so good you liked it twice, James ;-)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/4/2014 5:09:00 AM

Congrats on your win James!

James Fraser
Date: 9/4/2014 3:39:00 PM

Thank you kindly Connie, James :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2014 10:37:00 PM

James, Congratulations, on your win:) Stop by and enjoy my blog, "Edgar Allan Poe" if you'd like or have time. Always ~LINDA~

James Fraser
Date: 9/4/2014 3:39:00 PM

I'm smiling Linda, as I so loved writing about the 'Mechanics' of the Universe, James :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2010 3:37:00 AM

Great Haiku I can feel the space surrounding me...Good luck in the contest..Looks open like a winner..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2010 10:52:00 PM

wow, you did it quite simply profoundly! LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/10/2010 7:52:00 PM

A very original take on the photo, James. I'd wish you luck in the contest, but I don't think you'll need it. Great haiku! Love, Carolyn

Date: 4/10/2010 4:46:00 PM

Interesting perspective. Never thought of it this way before but true it is. The title is fitting for the poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comments. Karen

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/10/2010 2:20:00 PM

One of my favorite subjects space. Excellent haiku. God Bless Phyl

Anthony Amero

Date: 4/10/2010 1:48:00 PM

I like this.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2010 1:28:00 PM

nice haiku