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The Mechanics


Three dimensional
This conceptual framework
Is what we call space

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Jan Allison

September 4, 2014 at 12:41 PM

many congrats on your win James:-) hugs Jan xxx

James Fraser

September 4, 2014 at 3:51 PM

Thank you Jan, isn't Space wonderful, James :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 4, 2014 at 7:12 AM

Space nicely defined, James. congrats

James Fraser

September 4, 2014 at 3:49 PM

Be like me and close your eyes. Drift, drift, through cloudless skies. Enter out to the dark beyond, for I desire the day, a signal transponds. Thank you Dr. Ram - James.......

Connie Marcum Wong

September 4, 2014 at 5:10 AM

Congrats on your win James!

James Fraser

September 4, 2014 at 3:40 PM

Like New York in a way, so good you liked it twice, James ;-)

Connie Marcum Wong

September 4, 2014 at 5:09 AM

Congrats on your win James!

James Fraser

September 4, 2014 at 3:39 PM

Thank you kindly Connie, James :)

Poet Destroyer A

September 3, 2014 at 10:37 PM

James, Congratulations, on your win:) Stop by and enjoy my blog, "Edgar Allan Poe" if you'd like or have time. Always ~LINDA~

James Fraser

September 4, 2014 at 3:39 PM

I'm smiling Linda, as I so loved writing about the 'Mechanics' of the Universe, James :)

Sara Kendrick

April 11, 2010 at 3:37 AM

Great Haiku I can feel the space surrounding me...Good luck in the contest..Looks open like a winner..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

April 10, 2010 at 10:52 PM

wow, you did it quite simply profoundly! LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

April 10, 2010 at 7:52 PM

A very original take on the photo, James. I'd wish you luck in the contest, but I don't think you'll need it. Great haiku! Love, Carolyn

April 10, 2010 at 4:46 PM

Interesting perspective. Never thought of it this way before but true it is. The title is fitting for the poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comments. Karen